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I used to dress up and party on Halloween. These days I don't dress up myself, but my son dressed up and we had a family Halloween party. I have no plans for this year yet. Do you have any special plans?
I used to dress up and party on Halloween. These days I don't wear costumes myself, but my son dressed up, and we had a family Halloween party. I have no plans for this year yet. Do you have any special plans?
Last year he became a pumpkin. Before that he became a prince. This year I'm trying to figure out what kind of costume he should wear. We will also have a Halloween party at the preschool. The little kids look so cute in their costumes.
Last year he dressed up as a pumpkin, and the year before that, he was a prince. This year I'm trying to figure out what kind of costume he should wear. We'll also have a Halloween party at the preschool. The little kids look so cute in their costumes.
2. This creates a smoother connection between the two sentences. It shows that the actions are part of a sequence, making it clear that dressing up as a pumpkin happened last year and dressing up as a prince occurred in the preceding year.
3. Add a comma (,) to mark a short pause.
4. This verb directly describes his state during the past event of wearing a costume. 'Became' suggests a transformation or change into a prince, which may not accurately convey the idea of simply dressing up in a costume.
5. Use contractions in everyday speech to sound natural.
This year I am thinking a ghost costume would be a good idea. My son loves ghosts these days and likes to watch ghost books and videos. It is a unique hobby.
This year I'm thinking that a ghost costume would be a good idea. My son loves ghosts these days and likes books and videos about ghosts. It's a unique hobby.
2, Add 'that' to introduce the clause properly.
3. In the original phrase, 'likes to watch' is not suitable for books, as books are read rather than watched. The correction eliminates this inconsistency by simply using 'likes,' which can apply to both books and videos without specifying the action, making the sentence more accurate.
4. The phrase 'about ghosts' clearly indicates that both the books and videos are related to ghosts. 'Ghost books' could be somewhat ambiguous, as it may not be immediately clear to everyone that the books are about ghosts.
When I was a child, Halloween was not popular in Japan, so I never went trick-or-treating. Recently, it has become much more popular, so I have done it with my son at a neighborhood store event.
When I was a child, Halloween was not popular in Japan, so I never went trick-or-treating. Recently, it has become much more popular, so I've participated in it with my son at a neighborhood store event.
Pre schools are already decorated for Halloween. These are pumpkin decorations made by the children. Every year, the head of the Pre school dresses up as a witch.
Preschools are already decorated for Halloween. These are pumpkin decorations made by the children. Every year, the head of the preschool dresses up as a witch.
2. Here's an alternative: 'adorned'
3. Here's an alternative: 'created'
4. This is written as one word and is classified as a common noun, so it should be written in lowercase unless it starts a sentence.
Well done! Have a fantastic speaking lesson!
関連単語
- event(イベント)
- wear a costume(仮装する)
- put make-up on(メイクする)
- decoration(飾り)
- trick or treat(トリック・オア・トリート)
関連フレーズ
- We're planning a Halloween event at the park.(公園でハロウィーンのイベントを計画しています。)
- Every Halloween, I wear a costume inspired by my favorite movie character.(毎年ハロウィンには、好きな映画のキャラクターにちなんだ仮装をします。)
- For this Halloween, I'm going to put make-up on to look like a zombie.(今年のハロウィンは、ゾンビメイクをしようと思っています)
- Jack-o'-lanterns are my favorite Halloween decoration.(カボチャのランタンは、私のお気に入りのハロウィーンの飾りです。)
- "Trick or treat!" is the common thing to say on Halloween.(「トリック・オア・トリート!」はハロウィーンの定番の掛け声です。)
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2. Use a comma (,) to join independent clauses.