小売業界の拡大について必要と考えることを伝えてみよう

Talking about how to expand the retail
あなたは同僚と小売業界の拡大について話をしています。
小売業の発展のために何が必要か、あなたの考えを伝えてみましょう。
How can we expand the retail industry?
 
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How can we expand the retail industry?

It is very difficult to expand the retail industry nowadays because on-line shopping is rapidly growing all over the world and customers are transferred to it. We as a retail industry need to enter to the on-line shopping business as well in parallel with real shops. Otherwise, we will probably deteriorate continuously.

自然な表現

It is very difficult to expand the retail industry nowadays because online shopping is rapidly growing all over the world and customers are more attracted to it. We as a retail industry need to enter -the online shopping business as well in parallel with real shops. Otherwise, we will continue losing sales. 

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I see. Do you think on-line shops simply can't survive without having actual shops you can visit physically? Isn't most of the shopping done on-line nowadays?

I do not think that on-line ships cannot survive without actual shops because you can see Amazon is now proliferating all over the world without having actual shops. However, I do not think most of the shopping are done on-line even nowadays. Actual shops are still needed for buying fresh food for me.

自然な表現

I do not think that online ships cannot survive without actual shops because you can see Amazon is now proliferating all over the world without having actual shops. However, I do not think most of the shopping are done online even nowadays. Actual shops are still needed for buying fresh food, in my opinion.

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You are right. Retailers still have such an advantage. How else can the physical shops try to survive the competition?

Again, it is a very difficult question for me to think of how physical shops can survive the competition. I think that price can be a point of difference vs. Amazon. A drug store located near my house is selling some products much cheaper price than Amazon as a limited time offer. Physical shops have to provide a clear reason why consumers need to visit their shops.

自然な表現

Again, it is a very difficult question for me to think of how physical shops can survive the competition. I think that price can be a point of difference vs. Amazon. A drug store located near my house is selling some products much cheaper -than Amazon as a limited time offer. Physical shops have to provide a clear reason why consumers need to visit their shops.

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関連単語

  • expansion（拡大）
  • retail industry（小売業界）
  • commodity（日用品）
  • compete（競争）
  • tax increase（消費税増税）

関連フレーズ

  • Some companies have used their low prices as a means to expand.（いくつかの企業は低価格を武器に拡大を進めています。）
  • Competition within retail stores has occurred as a result of the expansion.（拡大の結果、小売店内での競争が発生しました。）
  • Effective promotion is a key factor in expanding the industry.（効率良い広告が事業拡大のカギです。）
  • Other factors besides low prices can contribute to the expansion of the industry, such as the increase in operational hours and higher value.（低価格以外にも、稼働時間の増加や高額化など、産業の拡大に寄与する要素があります。）
  • Increasing the size of a company and increasing the number of chains are key factors to expanding.（会社の規模を大きくしたり、チェーン店を増やしたりすることは、拡大のための重要な要素です。）

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