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My husband and I traveled to Antelope Canyon and Monument Valley which located in the northern part of Arizona. It took about 6 hours by car from home. That was my first time to go there, so I was exited. We were participated in two tours and Navajo people guided us. Navajo is one of the biggest native American tribes and they run tours around Navajo area for tourists. During the tour, they told us lots of their culture and histories.
My husband and I traveled to Antelope Canyon and Monument Valley which is located in the northern part of Arizona. It took about 6 hours by car from our home. That was my first time to go there, so I was excited. We participated in two tours and Navajo people guided us. Navajo is one of the biggest Native American tribes and they run tours around Navajo areas for tourists. During the tour, they told us lots about their culture and history.
I didn't know that there is a genetical link between Japanese and Navajo people because their ancestors came from the Asian continent. Navajo's newborns have Mongolian blue spots at their buttocks and almost all Japanese newborns also have them.
I didn't know that there is a genetic link between Japanese and Navajo people because their ancestors came from the Asian continent. Navajo newborns have Mongolian blue spots on their buttocks, and almost all Japanese newborns also have them.
I mean the news about genetic link made me happy. So I seem they closer to me than I expected. We were participated in two tours then. One was a hiking tour at lower Antelope Canyon area, that's view was amazing. Other one was a sunrise tour at Monument Valley. I enjoyed the latter more. Because Navajo tour guide took us lots of important areas for Navajo and he shared us a lot about their culture more.
I mean the news about the genetic link made me happy. So I realized they are closer to me than I expected. We participated in two tours there. One was a hiking tour at the lower Antelope Canyon area, its view was amazing. The other one was a sunrise tour at Monument Valley. I enjoyed the latter more because the Navajo tour guide took us to lots of important areas for the Navajo people and he shared a lot more about their culture.
2. 'realized' best expresses what you noticed.
3. 'are' shows their state.
4. 'were' isn't necessary as 'we participated' shows what you did.
5. 'there' shows where you did this from.
6. Definite article 'the' shows what area it was exactly.
7. 'its' best expresses what view was amazing.
8. 'the other one' shows what the other tour was about.
9. The two sentences can be joined as they are related.
10. As he was a specific tour guide definite article 'the' is added.
11. 'to' shows where he took you.
12. This best describes who those areas are important to.
13. 'us' isn't necessary.
14 and 15. It's best to place 'more' here.
関連単語
- fantastic（すばらしい）
- railroad trip（鉄道旅行）
- a solitary journey（一人旅）
- by plane（飛行機で）
- for the first time in my life（人生初の）
- a sightseeing spot（観光スポット）
- an outlook（視野）
- region（地域）
- a prefecture（県）
- an area（地域）
- local people（地元の人々）
関連フレーズ
- The trip was fantastic.（旅行はとってもよかったよ。）
- I went on a railroad trip.（電車に乗って行ってきました。）
- This was my first plane trip.（今回はじめて飛行機に乗りました。）
- I traveled abroad for the first time in my life.（人生で初めて海外旅行に行ってきました。）
- I went to some famous sightseeing spots such as the Eiffel Tower.（エッフェル塔などの有名な観光地にも行きました。）
- Through my trip, I broadened my outlook.（今回の旅で、私は自分の視野を広げることができました。）
こんな方にオススメ
2. 'our' shows whose home it is.
3. Spelling correction.
4. 'were' isn't necessary.
5. As this is a proper noun 'Native' is also capitalized.
6. As you are talking about them generally the plural form is used.
7. 'about' best describes what they told you.
8. 'history' is used as you are talking about one kind of history.