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あなたは、以前に英語で言えなかったことついて話しています。
語学を学習していく上で、『うまく表現できないかった...』と思うことは何度もあります。そこで、わからなかった表現、言い回しをそのままにするのではなく、復習していきましょう。
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I'd like to explain how to start to practice yoga excises for a very beginner at one's home on one's own.
Yoga looks like to do warm-up exercises at the beginning of P.E. class. I think that is good to start doing yoga. There is one thing you need to add in it is to do heartily.

自然な表現

I'd like to explain how to start to practice yoga exercises for a very beginner at one's home on one's own.
Yoga looks like doing warm-up exercises at the beginning of a P.E. class. I think it's good to start practicing yoga. There is one thing you need to add, which is to do it heartily. 

1. Spelling corrected.
2. A gerund is needed here, you cannot use to + infinitive in this context.
3. The indefinite article is needed here because you have a countable noun in its singular form and you don't talk specifically.
4. This is a more natural expression.
5. You omitted a pronoun that serves as an object. Also, you need to make a relative clause or to divide this sentence by putting a full stop.
That's interesting. I have always wanted to learn a little yoga at home. What kind of warm should a beginner do?

Beginners should do warm one's muscle gentle stretch. To start moving one's body slowly and feel which body parts are stimulated.
Muscles are fragile. If you trained your muscles, the muscle fibers would be broken at a second and rebuild new strong spring muscles. Muscle weakness occurs an inflexible. I suggest doing it with muscle training.

自然な表現

Beginners should do a warm-up by gently stretching their muscles. It is about moving one's body and feeling which body parts are stimulated. 
Muscles are fragile. If you trained your muscles, the muscle fibers would be broken at a second and rebuilt into new strong spring muscles. Muscle weakness occurs sometimes and I would suggest doing it with muscle training to avoid it.

1. You need to explain how something is done, and you do that by this construction.
2. This is a more natural expression. You cannot start a sentence with the preposition 'to' and end it like this. In that case, you would have to conclude the sentence somehow, by using 'is ....'.
3. You need to use this expression here.
4. This is a more natural expression. I am also not sure what you exactly wanted to say here so please consult with the Skype teacher.
5. You need to add this expression here in order to provide further information.
Okay. I will start by stretching first. After stretching my body, what is the next thing that a beginner should do?

Warm-up and heat-up. Move with flow few poses with breathing likewise with inhalation put the arms up, with exhalation put the arms down. This circle be done few times and add another movement. With inhalation put the arms up, with exhalation bend forward to the Uttanasana, (bend the knees slightly, make curve on your back and touch the earth, stretch your back. Then come up to the previous position the arms up and with breath out put the arms down.
Can you visualize this?

自然な表現

Warm-up and heat-up. Move with the flow a few poses with breathing likewise, with inhalation put the arms up, with exhalation put the arms down. This circle should be done a few times and add another movement. With inhalation put the arms up, with exhalation bend forward to the Uttanasana, (bend the knees slightly, make a curve on your back and touch the earth, stretch your back. Then come up to the previous position the arms up and with breath out put the arms down.
Can you visualize this?

1. The definite article is needed here.
2. A comma is needed here.
3. You need to add a modal verb here in order to show a suggestion.
4. The indefinite article should be used here.
5. Refer to #4.
Yes, it seems that I must also practice some breathing exercises. How long does a beginner yoga should be?

Even 10 minute or 15 minutes you take, that will work for you.
Yoga is too famous, you should do it whenever, whatever you can do it.
Enjoy !! Many pleasure will be brought on you.:)

自然な表現

Even 10 or 15 minutes would work for you.
Yoga is very popular, you should do it whenever you can and you should do whatever you can do. 
Enjoy !! Many pleasures will be brought on you.:)

1. No need to repeat 'minutes'. Also, try to make this sentence simpler. Sometimes, less is more.
2. A person can be famous. A method or some practice can be popular.
3. You need to be careful about how you use 'whenever' and 'whatever'. You need a construction like this.
4. You used 'many', therefore, you should use the plural form here.
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