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幼稚園の先生に子供の様子を聞いてみよう

Your Child at School
あなたは幼稚園の先生に自分の子供は幼稚園に馴染んでいるか聞いています。
幼稚園で子供が馴染んでいるのか、友達ができたのか心配なとき幼稚園の先生に聞きましょう。
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Do you have any worries concerning your child at pre-school?
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Do you have any worries concerning your child at pre-school?

Is she make a good with class's friend? Actually she said , she don't want to play specific friend. How about spend on school?

自然な表現

Did she make any new friends with her classmates? Actually, she said she doesn't play with any specific friend. How does she spend her time in school?

1. I changed the word choice and word order to make it sound more natural-
Your child gets along really well with other children although there are times that she just prefers to play along but that is nothing to worry about. Dis she say anything about playing with her classmates at school?

Yes.She says that I don't want to play with Ena. We asked to her a reson. But she does not say anything.She has never said to about it. What happen with Ena. Do you know??

自然な表現

Yes. She says that she doesn't want to play with Ena. We asked her for a reason but she didn't say anything. She said nothing. Do you know what happened between Ena and her?

1. Spacing is needed after the punctuation. It also sounds more natural if we use indirect speech.
2. I connected these two sentences with a conjunction to make it sound more natural.
3. More simple and natural.
4. I connected these two sentences to make it sound more natural.
I guess she had a misunderstanding with Ena or there's something in Ena's personality which she didn't like. Preschool is also the time when children start to choose their set of friends.

I see. I think Ena is come from japan last month. She can't speak english verywell. My daughter can speak Japanese ,so usually Ena talks with her. But teacher says her " No speak Japanese" so, I think my daughter fells bad..

自然な表現

I see. I think Ena came from Japan last month. She can't speak English very well. My daughter can speak Japanese so usually Ena talks with her. Teacher often says them not to speak in Japanaese so I think my daughter feels bad. 

1. 'Last month' indicates past activity, we know when it happened so we need to use Past Simple. Also, Japan is spelled with a capital letter.
2. Names of languages are spelled with a capital letter.
3. Spelling corrected. 45. No need for a comma.
4. It is better to use indirect speech. Also, I removed a comma.
Oh really? Why is it that the teacher doesn't like their communication in Japanese? Is she an English teacher?

Yes.English teacher says that. But it is international school, it is natural. But any other her class teacher makes together my daughter and ena... It is natural too.

自然な表現

Yes. She is an English teacher. But it is an international school, it is natural. But in all of the other classes, Ena and my daughter spend time together. It's natural. 

1. Spacing needed. I also changed the word choice to make it sound more natural.
2. We commonly use articles before adjectives.
3. I changed the word choice to make it sound more natural.
4. More natural.
Well, you should try to explain that it's better to use English and practice it, because the more she does it, the easier it will be. Do you practice English with her?

Yes.I think recently Ena came to this school from Japan. So,maybe
she can't understand what teachers says. My daughter enrolled this school 2 years ago.
She can understand English.

自然な表現

Yes. I think Ena came to this school from Japan recently. So, maybe she can't understand what teachers say. My daughter enrolled this school 2 years ago. She can understand English.

1. and 3. Spacing needed.
2. I changed the word order to make it sound more natural.
4. The noun 'teachers' is plural, so it has to be followed by a plural verb.
  • health(健康)
  • allergy(アレルギー)
  • friend(友達)
  • bully(いじめ)
  • pre-school(幼稚園)
  • I am worried about her health.(彼女の健康が心配です。)
  • How is my son behaving?(息子の態度はどうですか?)
  • My daughter doesn't have an allergy.(娘はアレルギーを持っていません。)
  • Is there any bullying?(いじめはありますか?)
  • How is my child doing with his friends?(友達とはどう過ごしていますか?)

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