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担当している企業の投資価値について分析結果を説明しよう
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We invested a "tZERO" company and now the company was one-fifth value when we invested because it has $60 million. That reason is the company announces a deficit in the fiscal year meeting. However, they invest a lot of money for the future. We estimate the company's value will be 100 times than our investment timing because their product is very attractive from the following two points. The first attractive point is their product can reduce the maintenance cost. The second point is other companies can utilize it easily. In conclusion, we need to wait for two years.
We invested in "tZERO" company and now the company has one-fifth of the value it did when we invested because it is worth $60 million. The reason for this is the company announced a deficit in the fiscal year meeting. However, they invested a lot of money in the future. We estimate the company's value will be 100 times more than when we invested because their product is very attractive from the following two points. The first attractive point is their product can reduce maintenance costs. The second point is other companies can utilize it easily. In conclusion, we need to wait for two years.
Maybe we can discuss it in this time. Existing security exchanges pay money to third parties for settlement. However, tZERO doesn't need to pay money, so the trading fee becomes lower. Moreover, existing security exchanges have 2days delay from buying to the settlement because third parties need to authenticate customer trades. However, tZERO's blockchain technology can trade immediately because it can authenticate without third parties. Then, who authenticate trading? Blockchain technology has a decentralized system, so all participants authenticate our trades, so it secure and can't be tampered. It is very revolutionary, so we think tZERO replaces the existing market.
Maybe we can discuss it in this way. Existing security exchanges pay money to third parties for settlements. However, tZERO doesn't need to pay money, so the trading fee becomes lower. Moreover, existing security exchanges have two day delays from the buying time to the settlement time because third parties need to authenticate customer trades. However, tZERO's blockchain technology can trade immediately because it can authenticate trades without third parties. Then, who authenticates trading? Blockchain technology has a decentralized system, so all participants authenticate our trades, so it is secure and can't be tampered with. It is very revolutionary, so we think tZERO has a good chance of replacing the existing market.
2. The plural form is used as you are talking about them collectively.
3. This is a better way to express the delays.
4. You can show what time it takes to do this in this way.
5. 'Trades' shows what it authenticates.
6. 'Authenticates' is used to show what they do.
7. 'Is' shows what the state of the company is.
8. 'Tampered with' shows what cannot be done.
9. This best explains what you think of the company.
Honestly, yes. However, my product's market is $1.6Trillion, so we will make a $500million profit every year if we will get a 10% share of the market. I think tZERO has the potential because of three reasons. 1st team members are chosen by very talented people because tZERO adopt persons who work for a big company. 2nd technology level is top by far because tZERO continues to improve its product for 5 years. This is 3 times longer than other companies. 3rd the company has two important patents, so other competitors can't make the same exchange.
Honestly, yes. However, my product's market is worth $1.6Trillion, so we will make a $500million profit every year if we will get a 10% share of the market. I think tZERO has the potential to do this because of three reasons.
Firstly, the team members are chosen by very talented people because tZERO adopts people who work for big companies. Secondly, tZERO's technology level is by far the best because it has consistently improved it's product over the past five years. This is three times longer than other companies.
Thirdly, the company has two important patents, so other competitors can't make the same exchange.
2. This shows what it has the potential to do.
3 and 10. You can list the points in this way.
4. Definite article 'the' is used to show who you are talking about.
5. This is a better way to show what the company does.
6. Determiner 'a' is removed as the plural 'companies' is used.
7. As they are many the plural form is used.
8. This best describes the company's technology.
9. You can write it out in words.
関連単語
- risky assets（危険資産）
- investment value（投資価値）
- present value（現在価値）
- riskless (low risk) assets（安全資産）
- cash flow（現金流量）
関連フレーズ
- The company has value worth investing in.（この会社には投資する価値があります。）
- In the case of low risk assets, such as bonds, it is relatively easy to figure out the investment value.（債券などの低リスク資産の場合、投資価値を把握するのは比較的容易です。）
- In the case of low risk assets, it is difficult to grasp the investment value because future cash flow cannot be predicted.（低リスク資産の場合、将来のキャッシュフローが予測できないため、投資価値を把握することが困難です。）
- The company’s market will remain underpinned by solid Japanese investor demand.（引き続き、日本の投資家の堅調な需要に支えられた市場となります。）
- The firm is in dire need of capital now due to financial distress.（この会社は今、財政難で資金を必要としています。）
こんな方にオススメ
2. 'Has' shows what it possesses.
3. This shows the difference in its value from when you invested in it.
4. This can be used to show how much the company is worth collectively.
5. This is a better word arrangement.
6 and 7. As this already happened the past tense is used.
8. Preposition 'in' shows what they invested in.
9. 'More' is added to show how their value will increase.
10. This is a better way to show the comparison.
11. 'The' can be removed as you do not specify what maintenance it is.
12. As they are many we use the plural form.