日本の行事について説明しよう

Let's describe Japanese events.
あなたは日本の行事について紹介しています。
イベントが大好きな外国人の方はたくさんいます。日本らしい行事を紹介することで、日本に興味をもってもらえるかもしれませんね。
Could you tell me about Japanese events?
 
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Could you tell me about Japanese events?

In Spring, Japanese people enjoy viewing cherry blossom trees and having a picnic beneath cherry trees. A forecast announced blooms will start around March 29. I won't try to see them because I was already tired of them as a kid. I'm not too fond of cherry trees. There are a lot of insects and worms. I had no choice but to see them with an airman two years ago. I kindly brushed away a tiny fly on his face. He misunderstood my behavior and got horny. I wish there could be apple or mango trees instead.

自然な表現

In Spring, Japanese people enjoy viewing cherry blossom trees and having    picnics beneath cherry trees. The weather forecast announced blooms will start around March 29th. I won't try to see them because I became    tired of them as a kid. I'm not too fond of cherry trees, they have a lot of insects and worms. I had no choice but to see them with an airman two years ago. I kindly brushed away a tiny fly on his face. He misunderstood my behavior and got horny. I wish there could be apple or mango trees instead.

1. Indefinite articles are not used with plural nouns.
2. Use a plural noun as you are referring to many people.
3. Use the phrase for clarity.
4. Use ordinal numbers for dates.
5. Use ''became'' to indicate the result of something.
6. ''Already'' is not necessary.
7. Remove the full stop and join the sentences for better flow.
That sounds like a memorable experience! It's interesting how preferences for nature vary. Have you explored other types of blossoms or trees you might enjoy?

Yes, the horny airmen suddenly kissed me in public, and it was a funny experience. I'll try such an experience again. Seeing lavender and white birch in Hokkaido, northern Japan, was enjoyable. Several times to see them is enough. I want to travel on the Trans-Siberian Railway and go to Saint Petersburg. Trees and flowers in the scenery must be awesome.

自然な表現

Yes, the horny airman suddenly kissed me in public, and it was a funny experience. I'll try to have such an experience again. Seeing lavender and white birch in Hokkaido, northern Japan, was enjoyable. Several times of seeing them is enough. I want to travel on the Trans-Siberian Railway and go to Saint Petersburg. The trees and flowers in the scenery must be awesome.

1. Use a singular noun to refer to one person.
2. Use ''to have'' to introduce the object of the verb ''try''.
3. Use ''of seeing'' as it is clearer.
4. Use the definite article for something specific.
5. Use lowercase as the word no longer starts the sentence.
Exploring nature in Hokkaido and dreaming of the Trans-Siberian Railway journey must be exhilarating sounds like quite the adventure! What other travel destinations are on your bucket list?

Texas, Kenya, and Maldives are my special interests. I will ride on a horse or see a rodeo. Crossing over the border between Texas and Mexico illegally and smuggling weapons stirs up my interest. Yet, I'll never do them. In Kenya, joining safari tours is fine. In Moldive, I enjoy a do-nothing vacation and swim without wearing anything. Many people care about the effects of the weaker yen and think I might be hesitant to take a trip abroad, but nothing affects me. I'm affluent, and half of my assets comprise the US dollar.

自然な表現

Texas, Kenya, and the Maldives are my special interests. I will ride on a horse or see a rodeo. Crossing over the border between Texas and Mexico illegally and smuggling weapons stirs up my interest. Yet, I'll never do that. In Kenya, joining safari tours is fine. In the Maldives, I enjoy a do-nothing vacation and swim without wearing anything. Many people are worried about the effects of the weaker yen and think I should be hesitant to take a trip abroad, but nothing affects me. I'm affluent, and half of my assets are in    US dollars.

1. & 3. Use the definite article for something specific.
2. Use ''that'' to refer to what you have just mentioned.
4. Spelling correction.
5. Use ''are worried'' as ''care'' means look after something or love something.
6. Use ''should'' to refer to something one ought to do.
7. Use ''are'' to refer to the nature of something.
8. Use ''in'' to refer to the state or condition of something.
9. The definite article is usually not used for things in general.
10. Use a plural noun for things in general.
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  • Festival for children of three, five, and seven years of age(七五三)
  • The Star Festival(七夕)
  • The Doll's Festival(ひな祭り)
  • Annual Events(年間行事)
  • Respect-for-the-Aged Day is a Japanese national holiday.(敬老の日は日本の祝日です。)
  • We have a custom of spending New Year's Eve watching "Kōhaku" .(私の家では、毎年大晦日に紅白歌合戦を見ながら過ごします。)
  • It is customary in Japan to eat eel during the doyo period.(日本では土用の丑の日にうなぎを食べます。)
  • There are many events and customs to celebrate New Year’s Day.(お正月を祝うための行事や慣習がたくさんあります。)
  • This is called “otoshidama” and many children look forward to it very much!(これは「お年玉」と呼ばれていて、たいていの子どもはこれをとても心待ちにしています!)

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