VERSANT Part E 2

VERSANT Part E 2
Speakingレッスンでは、スクリプト学習後にPart AからPart Dの練習が可能です。ご希望のパートを講師にお伝えください。 また、ご希望に応じてフリートークも可能です。 各パートの内容は以下の通りです： ・Part A: Give a short answer to the question(質問) ・Part B: Repeat the sentence(復唱) ・Part C: Answer a question about a conversation(会話に関する質問) ・Part D: Answer questions about a passage (文章に関する質問)
Part E (Retell a passage) の問題です。 この問題では、物語を自分の言葉で正確に言い換えることが求められます。 リテリングした文章を送信すると、次の問題が自動で出題されるので、送信後の表示に従って次の問題に取り組みましょう。 1回のレッスンで、最大5つの問題に取り組むことができます。 【回答のポイント】 制限時間内に、物語の内容をできるだけ詳しく、かつ自分の言葉で言い換えることが重要です。 （VERSANTの試験本番では音声を聞いて回答をするため、文章は表示されません。回答時間は30秒です。） ※Versant is a registered trademark of Pearson Education Ltd. This product is not endorsed or approved by Pearson.
YUJIさんのレッスン
Karl loves to play videogames with his friends at lunch. Playing games with his friends is his way of forgetting about his problems. To his surprise, none of his friends are online today. He began to fidget and worry. Three knocks on the door and he found his friends ready to celebrate his birthday. He realized it's not the game but the company that makes him happy day in and day out.

Karl likes to play videogames with his friends. He immerses playing videogames. One day, he finds no one with playing. He is disappointed, but at that time door is opened and his friends celebrate his birthday. He finds it happy more than the game.

自然な表現

Karl likes to play video games with his friends. He immerses in them. One day, he finds no one to play with. He is disappointed, but at that time the door is opened and his friends celebrate his birthday. He finds it happier than the game.

1. Spelling correction.
2. The verb "immerse" usually requires the preposition "in".
3. This part was rephrased to reduce repetition.
4. This is the correct idiomatic expression.
5. Since you are referring to a specific door(Karl's home or room door in this case) a definite article is needed.
6. This is the correct comparative form for the adjective "happy".
The whole world is Bella's dance floor. She learned to dance from mimicking dance steps from several dancers. Every time she hears a beat, she can't help but dance gracefully to it. Upon winning a contest, she revealed that dancing is the only way in which she could express herself well. When she talks, she is incredibly awkward, but when she dances, she is like a whole new person.

Bella likes to dance everywhere.She can't stop moving when she hear a music.When she won a dance contest, she realized that her dance was expressed herself. She is very bright when she is dancing.

自然な表現

Bella likes to dance everywhere. She can't stop moving when she hears    music. When she won a dance contest, she realized that she could express herself through her dance. She is very bright when she is dancing.

1. The singular pronoun "she" requires the singular form of the verb.
2. "Music" is uncountable. Therefore, it cannot be used with an indefinite article.
3. This is the correct idiomatic usage of the verb "express".
4. Alternatively, you can say "She lights up".
Daniel loves mornings, especially because he likes to wake up early to see the sunrise. For him, a new day is a new chance. One thing that he does not like about mornings is making his bed. He says it is not needed because he is going to use it again later tonight. After watching some videos online, he learned that making the bed is a good sign to say "I am ready for this morning." Since then, he has happily made his bed.

Daniel loves waking up early and seeing the sunrise. He fell a new day is a newchance. However, he does't like to make his bed. He think it is wasteful. One day, he watched some vieos online. He knew that making the bed brings his happy.

自然な表現

Daniel loves waking up early and seeing the sunrise. He feels a new day is a new chance. However, he doesn't like to make his bed. He thinks it is wasteful. One day, he watched some videos online. He learned that making the bed brings him happiness.

1 and 4. Please refer to correction 1 in #4.
2, 3, and 5. Spelling corrections.
6. In the given context, "learned" is more appropriate since you are describing how Daniel gained new knowledge.
7. The pronoun "his" expresses possessive form or belonging. However, in this sentence, an object is needed. Hence, this is the correct pronoun.
8. "Happy" is an adjective and doesn't fit in the given sentence grammatically. We usually use nouns with the verb "bring". Hence, this is the correct form.

TIP: Make sure to review the correct verb usage and verb + noun agreement.
Enjoy your Speaking lesson!

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