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Speaking Independent Q3
If I were left on a deserted island, I would definitely prefer to bring my dog.
There are two reasons.
First, looking back to our history, dog has been the most intelligent human's partner without any doubt. They are a loyal and clever animal. For example, my dog can identify the variety of plants by her strong scense of smell. In addition, she is available for 24 hours to respond to anything that I order such as fetching a ball, or chasing a cat or barking to a postman. Having said that, she protects me from any harmful unknown.
The second reason is they are the most compassionate animal. Being alone in an isolated island means I need to battle with my absolute loneliness. With my dog, there is no need to worry about that emptiness.
As shown by the two reasons above, a dog is my one and only choice.
If I were left on a deserted island, I would definitely prefer to bring my dog.
There are two reasons.
First, looking back at our history, a dog has been the most intelligent human partner without any doubt. They are loyal and clever animals. For example, my dog can identify a variety of plants by her strong sense of smell. In addition, she is available for 24 hours to respond to anything that I order such as fetching a ball, chasing a cat, or barking at a postman. Having said that, she protects me from any harmful and unknown threats.
The second reason is they are the most compassionate animals. Being alone on an isolated island means I need to battle with my absolute loneliness. With my dog, there is no need to worry about that emptiness.
As shown by the two reasons above, a dog is my one and only choice.
Yes there are things I want my dog to help.
Firstly and most importantly, living in a deserted island requires food. I want my dog to fetch fish, to pick up edible fruits and plants.
I also want her to protect me from any predetors by threatning them.
Yes, there are things I want my dog to help with.
Firstly and most importantly, living on a deserted island requires food. I want my dog to fetch fish, and to pick up edible fruits and plants.
I also want her to protect me from any predators by threatening them.
2. A preposition is missing. Use the preposition ‘with’ to refer to what we use to do something.
3. The preposition is incorrect. Use ‘on’ to show that something is in a position above something else and touching it, or that something is moving into such a position.
4. Add 'and' to join words of the same part of speech, clauses, or sentences intended to be viewed collectively.
5&6. It’s a spelling mistake. A spelling error occurs when there is a mistake in the spelling.
Yes, it is very nice that my dog can help with gathering food and offering protections.
I wish I had an exciting training story to share with you, but my dog had already trained when I adopted her. Jen is a retired German Shepherd who used to work as a drug-defective dog at the airport.
Yes, it is very nice that my dog can help with gathering food and offering protection .
I wish I had an exciting training story to share with you, but my dog was already trained when I adopted her. Jen is a retired German Shepherd who used to work as a drug-defective dog at an airport.
2. 'Was' is the past tense of the verb 'be', used with singular subjects. It signifies a past state of being. 'Had' serves as the past participle and past tense of the verb 'have', used with both singular and plural subjects.
3. ‘the’ is used before a noun to indicate that the noun's identity is known to the reader. ‘a, an’ is used before a general noun or when its identity is unknown.
Finding Jen is the best thing happened to me during the pandemic. A good friend of mine who works as an airport policeman, introduced Jen to me.
There are two tasks that I found it hard with her training.
One is my physical strength. This is the first time I have the large dog at home. For instance, just taking her walk consumed all my energy on the first day.
Secondly, how to relax her was a difficult. For example, constant reminders are necessary in order to release her from her being on alert. That's two challenges.
Finding Jen is the best thing that happened to me during the pandemic. A good friend of mine who works as an airport policeman introduced Jen to me.
There are two tasks that I found hard with her training.
One is my physical strength. This is the first time I have had a large dog at home. For instance, just taking her for a walk consumed all my energy on the first day.
Secondly, learning how to relax her was difficult. For example, constant reminders are necessary in order to release her from being on alert. That's the two challenges.
2. Do not use a comma between the subject and verb of a sentence, when the subject has two verbs, when you are ending a sentence with an exclamation point or question mark, before the conjunction in a simple series, when the independent clause comes first, inside an independent clause, and between the subject and predicate.
3&9. This is a more natural expression. This phrase is unnecessary. It sounds repetitive.
4. You have a subject, but you are lacking a verb. The sentence is incomplete.
5. ‘the’ is used before a noun to indicate that the noun's identity is known to the reader. ‘a, an’ is used before a general noun or when its identity is unknown.
6. It's an addition to an incomplete sentence.
7. You’re correct. It’s an addition
8. Avoid using articles when discussing general concepts, mass nouns, languages, countries, sports, and games.
10. Use ‘the’ definite article to determine something specific.
Yes, there are few routines we have come up with after welcoming Jen to our family.
First step is turning our night owl life style to a morning one. Bringing her into the ocean early in the morning helps to release her energy because she loves to swim.
Another useful routine is giving her a nice long massage after the walk, which definitely works to let her guards down.
Relocating to the oceanside house made it all possible for us.
She is satient, with feeling, thoughts and opinions.
In summary, that's why she is a suitable companion in the island.
Yes, there are a few routines we have come up with after welcoming Jen to our family.
The first step is turning our night owl lifestyle into a morning one. Bringing her into the ocean early in the morning helps to release her energy because she loves to swim.
Another useful routine is giving her a nice long massage after the walk, which definitely works to let her guard down.
Relocating to an oceanside house made it all possible for us.
She is sentient, with feelings, thoughts, and opinions.
In summary, that's why she is a suitable companion on the island.
2. Use ‘the’ definite article to determine something specific.
3. It’s a compound word. Compound words are formed when two or more words combine to create a single word or a phrase that functions as a single word.
4. The preposition is incorrect. Use the preposition ‘into’ to indicate entry, insertion, collision, or transformation.
5. It's a single dog. Use the singular tense.
6. ‘the’ is used before a noun to indicate that the noun's identity is known to the reader. ‘a, an’ is used before a general noun or when its identity is unknown.
7. It’s a spelling mistake. A spelling error occurs when there is a mistake in the spelling.
8. You are speaking about ‘feelings’ in a general sense. Use the plural tense.
9. Use a comma to separate independent clauses, after an introductory clause or phrase, between all items in a series, to set off nonrestrictive clauses, and appositives, indicate a direct address, and set off direct quotations.
10. The preposition is incorrect. Use ‘on’ to show that something is in a position above something else and touching it, or that something is moving into such a position.
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2. Use “a” or “an” with a singular-count noun when you mean “one of many,” “any,” or “in general.”
3. Use an apostrophe to form the possessive form of a singular noun or a plural noun not ending in s by adding ' and an s at the end.
4. Avoid using articles when discussing general concepts, mass nouns, languages, countries, sports, and games.
5&13. You are speaking about ‘animals’ in a general sense. Use the plural tense.
6. ‘the’ is used before a noun to indicate that the noun's identity is known to the reader. ‘a, an’ is used before a general noun or when its identity is unknown.
7. It’s a spelling mistake. A spelling error occurs when there is a mistake in the spelling.
8. This is a more natural expression. This phrase is unnecessary. It sounds repetitive.
11. Add 'and' to join words of the same part of speech, clauses, or sentences intended to be viewed collectively.
12. It's an addition to an incomplete sentence.
14. The preposition is incorrect. Use ‘on’ to show that something is in a position above something else and touching it, or that something is moving into such a position.
15. You’re correct. You can also say, ‘My dog alleviates any concerns regarding that sense of emptiness. As demonstrated by the two reasons mentioned earlier, a dog is unequivocally my sole preference.'