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Sayakaさんのレッスン
How was your day today?

I love wine. However, I found that I get hives after drinking wine!
I always get hives weekend, and I've been feeling it's very strange because I don't have a stress compared to weekdays.
Last last weekend, I didn't drink wine but sake, then I didn't get hives.
So last weekend, my partner brought wines without antioxidants. We enjoyed it, and I only got a little hives. I'm now looking for a goods which eliminate antioxidants.

自然な表現

I love wine. However, I found that I get hives after drinking wine!
I always get hives on the weekend, and I've been feeling that it's very strange because I don't have     stress compared to weekdays.
Last     weekend, I didn't drink wine but sake, then I didn't get hives.
So last weekend, my partner brought wines without antioxidants. We enjoyed it, and I only got a little hives. I'm now looking for     goods which eliminate antioxidants.

1. Use ''on'' to indicate the day.
2. Use a definite article for something specific.
3. ''a'' is not necessary.
4. ''last'' is not necessary.
5. ''a'' is not necessary.
That’s really interesting! It sounds like the antioxidants in wine might be causing the issue. Have you tried other types of wine without additives?

The antioxidants are said which cause some troubles like headaches or hives. I've never heard any other additives which may cause troubles.
It is not good news for me; wine lover, but now I can stop warring the hives.
In addition, the hungover was a little lighter than usual.

自然な表現

The antioxidants are said to cause some troubles like headaches or hives. I've never heard of any other additives which may cause trouble.
It is not good news for me; a wine lover, but now I can stop worrying about the hives.
In addition, the hangover was a little lighter than usual.

1. Use the infinitive ''to cause''.
2. Add the missing word.
3. Use the singular form.
4. Use indefinite articles the first time you mention a countable noun: ''a'' for nouns starting with consonant sounds and ''an'' for words beginning with vowel sounds.
5. Use ''worrying about'' to make the meaning clear.
6. Spelling correction.
It's good to hear that you're feeling better and even had a lighter hangover! Have you considered trying organic wines? Maybe they could be a good option too!

Organic wine usually doesn't contain antioxidants. I am a sommelier. The wines my partner bought for me were both organic wines.

自然な表現

Organic wine usually doesn't contain antioxidants. I am a sommelier. The wines my partner bought for me were both organic wines.

1. Alternatively, use, ''normally'' in place of ''usually.''
  • a farewell party(送別会)
  • a welcome party(歓迎会)
  • a former colleague(かつての同僚)
  • presentation(発表、プレゼンテーション)
  • club activities(部活)
  • excursion(小旅行、遠足)
  • ordinarily(いつものように)
  • We had a farewell party.(送別会をした。)
  • I went to the bar and had three beers.(パーに行ってビールを3杯飲んできたところよ。)
  • I went for a drink with my former colleague.(かつての同僚と飲んできたんだよ。)
  • I went to the gym and swam in the pool.(ジムで泳いで来たんですよ。)
  • I felt better after going to the bar.(飲み屋に行ったら気分が晴れました。)

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