無料体験レッスン
Speaking Part 1 Question 1
I think it's MIYAMATURI. it's the most popular festival in my home country. it's held in UTUNOMIYA where is the biggest city in my home town in august.
The festival has the so big place . The festival's size is about 2 km. Futhermore, it has so many tasty food and drink, exciting event.
I think Miyamaturi is the most popular festival in my home country. It's held in August in Utunomiya, the biggest city in my home town .
The festival requires a big venue, about 2 km. Futhermore, it has a lot of tasty food and drink. It's an exciting event.
The people often eat some food or some drink with friend or family ,lover. Futhermore , they often watch OMIKOSI that is jaoanese traditional event. Because, this is what is said that there are God .
People often eat some food or drink with friends, family, or lovers. Furthermore, they often watch Omikosi which is a Japanese traditional event in honour of the gods.
2. Capitalise words that start sentences.
3. You may also use ''usually''.
4. ''some'' is not necessary.
5. Use a plural noun for general references, and use a comma to separate items on a list.
6. & 8. Place the comma immediately after the word.
7. Use plural nouns for general references.
9. Use lowercase for the rest of the word.
10. Use ''which'' to introduce relative clauses with additional information on preceding nouns.
11. Use indefinite articles the first time you mention a countable noun: ''a'' for nouns starting with consonant sounds and ''an'' for words beginning with vowel sounds.
12. Spell the word correctly and capitalise it as it is a proper noun.
13. Rephrase and join the sentences for better flow and clarity.
Yes,Of course . I participate in the festival every year. In addition, the festival is held twice a year .in the case of this year, it's held in August 4th and 5th.
It was so fun.
The mood of festival is so good. So, i participate in the festival.
Yes, of course. I participate in the festival every year. In addition, the festival is held twice a year. In the case of this year, it was held on August 4th and 5th.
It was so much fun.
The mood of the festival is so good, which is why I participate in the festival.
2. Use lowercase as it is not a proper noun.
5. Capitalise words that start sentences.
6. Use the past tense for past events.
7. Use ''on'' to indicate when something was done.
8. Use ''much'' to emphasise the fun.
9. Use ''the'' to refer to something specific.
10. Use a comma to join the sentences.
11. Use ''which'' to introduce relative clauses with additional information on preceding nouns.
12. Use ''is why'' to introduce te reason.
I think so. Because, it has many role such as to communicate with someone, to welcome god.
I think so. They have many roles such as communicating with someone, or welcoming god.
I don't think so. Because, in my home town, there are so many festival , so i can't stop to spend too much money for many festivals .
I don't think so because in my home town there are so many festivals, so I can't stop myself from spending too much money on many festivals.
2. & 3. The commas are not necessary.
4. & 8. Place the full stop immediately after the word.
5. ''I'' is always capitalised.
6. Use the phrase to make the meaning clearer.
7. Use ''on'' to refer to what something is used for.
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2. Capitalise words that start sentences.
3. & 5. Switch the position of ''in August'' to correct the word order and capitalise the names of the months.
4. Use lowercase for th rest of the word.
6. Rewrite and combine the sentences for better flow.
7. Use ''a lot of'' with uncountable nouns.
8. End the sentence to separate different ideas.
9. Use ''It's'' as the subject and verb of the sentence.
10. Use indefinite articles the first time you mention a countable noun: ''a'' for nouns starting with consonant sounds and ''an'' for words beginning with vowel sounds.