今日あったことについて話してみよう

Talking about your day
今日の出来事を話してみましょう。
今日はどのようなことがありましたか?印象に残っている出来事を話してみましょう。
Ranaさんのレッスン
How was your day today?

My husband and I met at a climbing gym and climbed together every weekend before we started dating. We have been married for 17 years. Today, we had a contractor install a bouldering wall on the wall of our home.

自然な表現

My husband and I met at a climbing gym and climbed together every weekend before we started dating. We have been married for 17 years. Today, we had a contractor install a bouldering wall on the wall of our home.

1. You expressed yourself well here. There is nothing to correct, so this is an alternative expression we could use in this context - "Today, we had a contractor set up a bouldering wall on the side of our house."
That sounds like a wonderful way to celebrate your shared passion for climbing! Having a bouldering wall at home must be a fantastic addition, allowing you both to enjoy climbing whenever you want. How has your climbing journey evolved over the years, and do you have any favorite climbing destinations or memorable experiences from your adventures?

Before my children were born, the two of us used to go to the climbing gym every week to enjoy the activity. These days we only go there occasionally. Our most memorable place is a climbing gym called PUMP2 in Kawagu, Saitama. We often had dinner after the gym at an eel restaurant near there.

自然な表現

Before my children were born, the two of us used to go to the climbing gym every week to enjoy the activity. These days we only go there occasionally. Our most memorable place is a climbing gym called PUMP2 in Kawagu, Saitama. We often had dinner after the gym at an eel restaurant near there.

1. You expressed yourself well here. There is nothing to correct, so this is an alternative expression we could use in this context - "We used to have dinner frequently after the gym at an eel restaurant close to the gym."
It sounds like those climbing gym outings and dinners at the eel restaurant were cherished memories for both of you. How often do you manage to visit PUMP2 and the eel restaurant these days? Have you explored any other climbing gyms or outdoor climbing spots since those memorable days at PUMP2?

We haven't gone to PUMP2 at all since I got married and moved to Tokyo. Instead, I have found several bouldering gyms in my neighborhood and occasionally go climbing.

自然な表現

We haven't gone to PUMP2 at all since I got married and moved to Tokyo. Instead, I have found several bouldering gyms in my neighborhood and occasionally go climbing.

1.2. The paragraph is well written, and there's nothing to correct or suggest here, so here are a few alternative expressions we could use in this situation. We could use "visited" and "relocated".
  • a farewell party(送別会)
  • a welcome party(歓迎会)
  • a former colleague(かつての同僚)
  • presentation(発表、プレゼンテーション)
  • club activities(部活)
  • excursion(小旅行、遠足)
  • ordinarily(いつものように)
  • We had a farewell party.(送別会をした。)
  • I went to the bar and had three beers.(パーに行ってビールを3杯飲んできたところよ。)
  • I went for a drink with my former colleague.(かつての同僚と飲んできたんだよ。)
  • I went to the gym and swam in the pool.(ジムで泳いで来たんですよ。)
  • I felt better after going to the bar.(飲み屋に行ったら気分が晴れました。)

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