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Writing Task 1 Question 8
The bar graphs provide information about the proportion of social media users by three different age groups between 2013 and 2018. According to the charts, Facebook is the most popular social media for all age ranges in both 2013 and 2018. While younger generations have notable growing in some social media, older generations change a little.
One of the significant feature is steadily increase in Facebook users among people aged 51 to 70. In 2013, the percentage is about 40% and the rate reach at almost 60 % in 2018. Other age range groups are almost 80% in 2013 and have subtle change in 2018.
Next important feature is dramatical growing among Tweitter and Instagram between 2013 and 2018. In 2013, the number of Twitter and Instagram users are 31% and 32% amoung age 18-30 respectively. After 5 years later, the ratio become 38% in Twitter and 52% in Instagram. Other age groups also slightly increase.
Lastely, it move similary that Linken users increase almost 10% in all age categories from 2013 to 2018.
The bar graphs provide information about the proportion of social media users by three different age groups between 2013 and 2018. According to the charts, Facebook was the most popular social media for all age ranges in both 2013 and 2018. While younger generations increased their use of some social media, the levels for older generations changed only a little.
One of the significant features was the steady increase in Facebook use among people aged 51 to 70. In 2013, the percentage was about 40% and the rate reached almost 60 % in 2018. Other age range groups were almost 80% in 2013 and had only a slight change in 2018.
The next important feature is the dramatic growth in the number of users of Twitter and Instagram between 2013 and 2018. In 2013, the number of Twitter and Instagram users was 31% and 32% among those aged 18-30, respectively. 5 years later, the ratio became 38% for Twitter and 52% for Instagram. Other age groups also slightly increased.
Lastly, a similar trend was found among LinkedIn users, whose numbers increased by almost 10% in all age categories from 2013 to 2018.
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2. This is a clearer way to say this because usage increases, not numbers
3. This is the correct expression here because it is clearer and more common.
4. This is the correct word because it collocates with the word, levels
5. A plural is needed here after the expression 'one of'
6. This is the correct word to use here because an adjective is needed before a noun
7. This is a clearer way to say this because 'use' increases, not people
8. This is a clearer way to say this because a preposition can only be used before a noun
9. This is a clearer and more common way to express this idea
10. The definite article is needed here, before this word 'next'
11. This is a clearer and more common way to express this idea
12. A simple past tense is needed here for a completed action in the past.
13. This is the correct expression here because it is clearer and more common.
15. This is the correct preposition here because this word, ratio, accompanies the dependent preposition, for or of
16. This is the correct spelling for this word.
17. A possessive relative pronoun is needed here for clarity, referring to users