Speaking Part 1 Question 4

Speaking Part 1 Question 4
*このレッスンでは本試験の形式と同じように、用意された5つの質問に回答します(講師が返信せず、自動返信となります) Topic: Let's talk about movies
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What kinds of movies do you like best? [Why?]

Talking of movies, there are many movie genres such as Action, Comedy, Documentary, Horror, Romance, Science Fition, and so forth. I like most of them, and I much prefer Comedy and Science Fiction. That is because Comedy makes me fun and lough even though I feel depressed by troubles of work or private matters, and SF gives me new perspectives of thinking and idea that I can't figure out by myself. There are actually useful for me to enjoy or improve my life.

自然な表現

Talking of movies, there are many movie genres such as Action, Comedy, Documentary, Horror, Romance, Science fiction, and so forth. I like most of them, and I mostly prefer Comedy and Science Fiction. That is because Comedy makes me laugh even when I feel depressed by troubles of work or private matters, and SF gives me new perspectives of thinking and ideas that I can't figure out by myself. They are actually useful for me to enjoy or improve my life.

1. This is a more suitable adverb choice to use here.
2. This is a more concise word structure for a definitive sentence
3. Correct pronoun to use here.
Do you have a favorite actor? [Why?]

I like Tom Cruise, who has acted as many tough guy characters. I am fond of a movie of Mission Impossible in which Tom played. The movie is known as a hard action movie. Although some of dangerous actions were replaced by computer graphics, Tom was acting out the dangerous scenes in real. I like his diligence and strictness in his job.

自然な表現

I like Tom Cruise, who has portrayed many tough guy characters. I am fond of a movie called Mission Impossible in which Tom played a role. The movie is known as a hard-action movie. Although some of the dangerous scenes were done using computer graphics, Tom chooses to act out the dangerous scenes. I like his diligence and strictness in his job.

1-3. Rephrase for clarity.
4, 5. This is a more concise word structure for a definitive sentence
How often do you go to the cinema to see a movie? [Why/Why not?]

I go to the cinema theater around once a month. I actually used to go to the movies every week, however now we can watch most movies at home online, which is more convenient and easier for me. Therefore, The chance to go to the theater has decreased recently.

自然な表現

I go to the cinema    around once a month. I actually used to go to the movies every week, however, now we can watch most movies at home online, which is more convenient and easier for me. Therefore, my visits to the theater have decreased recently.

1. Redundancy.
2. This is a more concise word structure for a definitive sentence
When did you last go to see a movie?

It was last Monday. I went to watch a documentary movie in the cinema. As every Monday is the day when the price of movie ticket is discounted in the particular cinemas, I usually go to the movie on Monday. The price is around a half on the day.

自然な表現

It was last Monday. I went to watch a documentary movie in the cinema. As every Monday is the day when the price of movie tickets is discounted in    particular cinemas, I usually go to the cinema on Monday. The price is around half the normal price on the day.

1. Change to the plural noun form to fix the agreement mistake here.
2. Redundancy
3. Make use of this noun to be more specific here.
4. This is a more concise word structure for a definitive sentence
Would you like to make a movie? [Why/Why not?]

I haven't tought such a thing before. If I dare to say so, my answer is yes. However, The work making a movie has many tasks and roles such as dicector, script, actor and actoress, sound, light, CG, advertisement, and so on. It is a huge work. Therefore, I am not sure how I can work for it. However, if my dream comes true, I want to play the lead role on a handsome and charming guy with many beautiful ladies who are crazy about me.

自然な表現

I haven't thought of such a thing before. If I dare to say so, my answer is yes. However, the work of making a movie has many tasks and roles such as director, script, actor and actress, sound, light, CG, advertisement, and so on. It is a huge work. Therefore, I am not sure how I can do it. However, if my dream comes true, I want to play the lead role of a handsome and charming guy with many beautiful ladies who are crazy about me.

1, 4, 5. Correct spelling.
2, 3. Add this missing preposition here.
6. Rephrase for clarity.
7. Correct preposition to add here, we say 'role of'

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