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Speaking Part 3 Question 1
There would be several reasons why some people enjoy festivals while others do not enjoy them. However, I reckon the main reason for the matter is that the individual personalities vary significantly. Even if people participate in the same festival, it would be immensely different how they feel about the festival. For instance, I really hate congestion, so I avoid taking part in a large festival which gathers a tremendous amount of people. It makes me severely unconfortable. Therefore, I prefer a moderate size event rather than a big festival. Whilst, some of my friends have little disgust in such crowds, so they willingly join in a large festival to enjoy it.
I think each individual has intrinsically different characters and preferences which affects how they find festivals.
That's why some people can enjoy festivals while others cannot.
There are several reasons why some people enjoy festivals while others do not enjoy them. However, I reckon the main reason for the matter is that _ individual personalities vary significantly. Even if people participate in the same festival, it would be immensely different how they feel about it. For instance, I really hate congestion, so I avoid taking part in a large festival that gathers a tremendous amount of people. It makes me severely uncomfortable. Therefore, I prefer a moderate-sized event rather than a big festival whilst some of my friends have little disgust for such crowds, so they willingly join _ a large festival to enjoy it.
I think each individual has intrinsically different characters and preferences, which affects how they find festivals.
That's why some people can enjoy festivals while others cannot.
I think it depends on the type of festivals. I suppose traditional festivals are getting less attention compared to the past. While some modern festivals like a manga festival and a summer music festival became more popular in the last decades. There is a generation gap in the preference of festivals. I think youngsters have little interest in traditional festivals, while they are increasingly attracted by contemporary festivals nowadays.
I think it depends on the type of festival. I suppose traditional festivals are getting less attention compared to the past. _ Some modern festivals like manga festivals and summer music festivals have become more popular in the last decades. There's a generation gap in the preference for festivals. I think youngsters have little interest in traditional festivals, while they're increasingly attracted by contemporary festivals nowadays.
2. No need to add this conjunction here as you're not contrasting ideas.
3, 4. Pluralize nouns when talking about something or a group of people in general.
5. Use the present perfect when you mean "so far; up until now".
6, 8. Try to always use contractions to make your sentences sound more idiomatic.
7. Use this preposition when referring to preferences.
It seems difficult to deal with the problem, though, the government has some measures. For example, the increasing amount of subsidies to the festival organizations would immensely help the quality of festivals. It will allow administrators to spend more money on advertisements which attracts more people. Another solution is education. I think if people learned more about national culture and traditions, they would be more interested in national festivals. I think that fostering patriotism is critical to halt the declining of the popularity of national festivals.
I think subsidies and education could be a possible solution for the government.
It seems difficult to deal with the problem, though the government could take some measures. For example, the increasing amount of subsidies for _ festival organizations would immensely help the quality of festivals. It would allow administrators to spend more money on advertisements to attract more people. Another solution is education. I think if people learned more about national culture and traditions, they would be more interested in national festivals. I think that fostering patriotism is critical to halting the decline of the popularity of national festivals.
I think subsidies and education could be a possible solution for the government.
2. The sentence was incomplete as it didn’t have a verb.
3. Use this preposition when you mean “intended to”.
4. No need for this article before a non-specific, plural noun.
5. Use this modal verb here as you're referring to a hypothetical situation.
6. Use this preposition + infinitive verb to indicate purpose.
7. Use gerunds when adding a verb after "foster".
8. Use this noun when you mean "become smaller, fewer, or less; decrease".
Yea, I think international festivals will become more popular than local festivals, because the advent of the Internet dramatically changed our perspective and gathering information. Now people can easily access information about global events which often attract larger attention rather than local festivals. Moreover, the new technology like virtual reality will alter the way of participation which allows people to attend without physical existence. I predict that more and more people will participate in international festivals through Virtual reality from home.
Yes, I think international festivals will become more popular than local festivals _ because the advent of the Internet dramatically changed our perspective and gathering of information. Now people can easily access information about global events that often attract larger attention _ than local festivals. Moreover, _ new technology like virtual reality will alter the way of participation, which allows people to attend virtually. I predict that more and more people will participate in international festivals through virtual reality from home.
2. No need for a comma before or after “because".
3. Add this preposition when you mean “in relation to”.
4. This relative pronoun sounds more idiomatic here.
5. No need to add this adverb after a comparative adjective when making comparisons.
6. No need to add an article before a plural noun.
7. Add a comma here as you are offering further clarification about something.
8. Use this adverb when you mean "by means of virtual reality techniques".
I believe that national festivals still play a critical role in maintaining our culture. Of course, some traditional festivals have been commercialised for the economy. However, it doesn't directly mean loss of the essence. National festivals are the primary source to conserve and foster national culture as long as local people convey the traditions to their next generation.
I believe that national festivals still play a critical role in maintaining our culture. Of course, some traditional festivals have been commercialised for the economy. However, it doesn't directly mean a loss of their essence. National festivals are the primary source to conserve and foster national culture as long as local people convey the traditions to the next generation.
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2. No need for this article before a non-specific, plural noun.
3. Use this pronoun here to avoid repetition.
4. This relative pronoun sounds more idiomatic here.
5. Spelling.
6. Add a hyphen when using two or more words as a singular adjective.
7. Use this preposition after the noun "disgust".
8. No need for a preposition after the verb "join".
9. Add a comma here as you are offering further clarification about something.