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Writing Task 1 Question 10
The line graph illustrates the percentage of four different countries' dishes which were eaten in Eastfield Shopping Centre from 1990 to 2015.
Overall, Mexican and American dishes were served very much and the percentage decreased. In contrast, the percentage of Thai and Japanese dishes were lower than those of Mexican and American dishes, but after it increased
First, 41% of all the dishes served in Eastfield Shopping Centre were Mexican dishes, and the percent was 43 in 1995. After that, the percentage decreased, and in 2010, Mexican dishes were 23%, which was about half as much as that in 1990. In 2015, the percentage was 33%
Second, the percentage of American dishes was second highest in 1990. The percentage increased and decreased. In 2005, it was 38%, which is the highest. However, In 2015, only 22% was American dishes there
In the other two countries, only 12% were Thai dishes in 1990 and increased. In 2010 the percentage was twice as much as that in 1990. Then, the percentage decreased a little and it was 17% in 2015. In addition, the percentage of Japanese dishes served in Eastfield Shopping Centre was lowest in 1990 and it was 8%. The percentage increased greatly from 2005 to 2010 and in 2015, 27% of all the dishes there were Japanese dishes, which was the second highest percentage of the 4 four countries.
The line graph illustrates the percentage of four different countries' dishes, which were eaten in Eastfield Shopping Centre from 1990 to 2015.
Overall, Mexican and American dishes were served very frequently, and the percentage decreased. In contrast, the percentage of Thai and Japanese dishes was lower than that of Mexican and American dishes, but it increased.
First, 41% of all the dishes served in Eastfield Shopping Centre were Mexican dishes, and the percentage was 43 in 1995. After that, the percentage decreased, and in 2010, Mexican dishes accounted for 23%, which was about half as much as in 1990. In 2015, the percentage was 33%.
Second, the percentage of American dishes was the second-highest in 1990. The percentage increased until 2005 and then witnessed a fall. In 2005, it was 38%, which is the highest. However, in 2015, only 22% were American dishes there.
In the other two countries, only 12% were Thai dishes in 1990, and then it increased. In 2010, the percentage was twice as much as in 1990. Then, the percentage decreased a little, and it was 17% in 2015. In addition, the percentage of Japanese dishes served in Eastfield Shopping Centre was the lowest in 1990, at 8%. The percentage increased greatly from 2005 to 2010, and in 2015, 27% of all the dishes there were Japanese dishes, which was the second-highest percentage of the four countries.
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2. And this is a better word choice to refer to the frequency of an action. You're not talking about quantity.
3,4. The subject is singular.
5. You need to use a noun here.
6. You can either say "accounted for 23%" or "amounted to 23%."
7. Your expression "The percentage increased and decreased" was grammatically correct, but it was too simplistic and elementary for the IELTS test. Try to come up with more specific and proficient sentences.
8. Add this pronoun as the subject.
9. You've been using "and" too many times.
10. Redundant number.