Speaking Part 1 Question 3

Speaking Part 1 Question 3
*このレッスンでは本試験の形式と同じように、用意された5つの質問に回答します(講師が返信せず、自動返信となります) Topic: Let's talk about school subjects
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 Do you like to study? [Why/Why not?]

I like to study basically especially history because I can get new knowledge and use it in my daily life. I believe that to study is the best way of self-investment.

自然な表現

I like to study    history because I can get new knowledge and use it in my daily life. I believe that studying is the best way of self-investment.

1. ''basically especially'' are not necessary.
2. Replace with the gerund to introduce what you believe.
What subject do you like most? [Why?]

My most favorite subject is history because I like to imagine the people's lives in different era, and I was probably influenced by one of my friends. She loved old myth and talked to me a lot.

自然な表現

My    favorite subject is history because I like to imagine    people's lives in different eras, and I was probably influenced by one of my friends. She loved old myths and told me a lot about them.

1. ''most'' is redundant as ''favorite'' means ''most preferred''.
2. The definite article is usually not used for things in general.
3. & 4. Use plural nouns for things in general.
5. Replace with ''told'' to indicate the information tou were given.
6. Use ''about them'' to refer to ''old myths''.
What do you find most interesting about this subject? [Why?]

The most interesting part of history is to be wrapped in mysteries. For instance, why Egyptian pyramids were built. I like imagine the potentials like pyramids. This is also because history become our good lessons.

自然な表現

The most interesting part of history is to be wrapped in mysteries. For instance, why the Egyptian pyramids were built. I like to imagine the uses of pyramids. This is also because history provides us with  good lessons.

1. Use the definite article for something specific.
2. Use the preposition ''to'' to indicate an intention.
3. Use ''use of'' as ''potentials like'' is unclear: ''potential'' is an uncountable noun.
4. Replace with ''provides us with'' as it is clearer.
What don't you like about this subject? [Why?]

The bad point of history is also to be wrapped in mysteries and uncertainty. History are sometimes changed by new evidences, and we have to update our knowledges again and again.

自然な表現

The disadvantage of learning history is also being wrapped in mysteries and uncertainty. History is sometimes changed by new evidence, and we have to update our knowledges again and again.

1. Use ''disadvantage'' as ''bad point'' is not very clear.
2. Use ''learning'' to make the meaning clearer.
3. Use the gerund to introduce the object of the verb ''is''.
4. Use a singular verb as the subject is singular.
5. ''evidence'' is an uncountable noun.
How would studying this subject be beneficial for your future?

As I mentioned, history gives us the cautionary tales and example. For example, Japan have experienced countless earthquake, so if I experience it in future, I could think what I should do that time by learning past people's experiences.

自然な表現

As I mentioned, history gives us    cautionary tales and examples. For example, Japan has experienced countless earthquake, so if I experience them in future, I will know what to do based on past people's experiences.

1. The definite article is usually not used for things in general.
2. Use plural nouns for things in general.
3. Use a singular verb as the subject is singular.
4. Replace with a plural pronoun for the plural noun, ''earthquakes''.
5. Rephrase for clearer meaning.

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