自己紹介してみよう

Brief self-introduction

初対面の人に自己紹介してみましょう。

自己紹介は、新しく出会った人との最初のコミュニケーションです。名前、出身地、趣味など、基本的な内容から始めてみましょう。

Kanaさんのレッスン

添削前の表示会話のみを表示

Hello. How are you? What's your name?

Hi, I'm fine. I'm Kana.

自然な表現

Hi, I'm fine. I'm Kana.

1. Your sentences were correct. I will offer you an alternative phrase. You can use "my name is" instead.

Hi Kana. My name is Jennifer Anderson. It's a pleasure to meet you. How's your family? Where do you live?

Hello Jennifer Anderson.
My family is always happpy!
I live in Italy and I'm enjoying here.
How about you, where do you live??

自然な表現

Hello Jennifer Anderson.
My family is always happy!
I live in Italy, and I'm enjoying it here.
How about you, where do you live??

1. This looks like a spelling mistake. "happy."
2. A comma before the conjunction "and" is needed when connecting two independent clauses.
3. The phrase was incomplete, so we added the pronoun "it."

I see. That sounds great. I live in Manila. How is it living in Italy? Please tell me more about it.

Oh, you are living in Manila!!
I like the fashions and foods in Italy.
People are fashionable and kind .
I like foods in Italy, like pizza, pasta and focaccia. There are many tastes.

自然な表現

Oh, you are living in Manila!!
I like the fashion and food in Italy.
People are fashionable and kind.
I like foods in Italy, like pizza, pasta, and focaccia. There are many tasty foods.

1. and 2. The plural form of the words don't work here. "fashion" and "food" is needed instead.
3. When you list more than two things, a comma is needed before the conjunction "and."
4. We added this phrase instead of the word "tastes" to make the sentence more precise and concise.

That is really interesting to hear. Could you please tell me what kind of job you have? Or are you still in school?

I am in elementary school. I like art the most. Because it is fun to draw and paint. It's difficult to draw and paint sometimes, but after I complete the picture, I feel happy. I like reviewing pictures after drawing.

自然な表現

I am in elementary school. I like art the most because it is fun to draw and paint. It's difficult to draw and paint sometimes, but after I complete the picture, I feel happy. I like reviewing pictures after drawing.

1. These two sentences were related, so we merged them.

That's great! I was never really that good at drawing, so I always admired people who can draw and paint. What do you like drawing and painting the most?

I like drawing characters the most and it is the most difficult drawing for me.
My favorite parts of drawing characters are the time it takes. To draw characters you need the time. So when I finish it and the picture is perfect, I feel happy.
The difficult parts are the shape and the position of eyes, noses, mouths and body. There many types of body parts.The position is very difficult. The position changes character's impressions. The most difficult body part is eyes. It changes the character's impressions most. Drawing is fun! Thank you for this conversation!!

自然な表現

I like drawing characters the most, and it is the most difficult drawing for me.
My favorite parts of drawing characters are the time it takes. To draw characters, you need time. So when I finish it, and the picture is perfect, I feel happy.
The difficult parts are the shape and the position of eyes, noses, mouths, and bodies. There are many types of body parts. The position is very difficult. The position changes the character's impressions. The most difficult body part is the eyes. It changes the character's impressions most. Drawing is fun! Thank you for this conversation!!

1 and 4. A comma before the conjunction "and" is needed when connecting two independent clauses.
2. A comma is needed to separate phrases.
3. The article is not needed before the noun "time."
5. When you list more than two things, a comma is needed before the conjunction "and."
6. You wrote these things in the plural form, and that's why "bodies" is needed.
7. The phrase was incomplete, so we added the verb form "are."
8. The article "the" is needed before "character's impressions."
9. The article "the" is needed before the noun "eyes."

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