子供の写真描写をしてみよう

Describe a picture of child
写真を見て内容の説明をしてください
子供にはすさまじいエネルギーがあります。周りの大人の癖や言葉、考え方や行動など全てから学んで自分のものにしてしまいます。好奇心も旺盛な子供が多く、所構わず目に入るスイッチを押してしまったり、土をほじくり返したり、彼ら彼女らは自分の思うように力いっぱい生きています。16世紀の農民画家ブリューゲルもその子供のエネルギーに魅了され、大勢の子供が遊ぶ様だけを描いた「子供の遊び」という絵画を描いています。いつの時代も子供はエネルギーの塊ですべてを吸収して成長していきます。
Please describe this picture.
 
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Please describe this picture.

This picture seems a family picture. There is a kid who is running, his mother is by his who is sitting on the flour, and his father is sitting on a table who is opening a newspaper paying his attention his child. This room is made of many wooden furniture, a desk chandelier, a desk, chairs, floor, and something in the middle of room.
My husband and I are very looking forward to child rearing. We would like to raise our children together to feed them, playing at a park, going to amusement parks, teaching them, and etc.

自然な表現

This picture seems like a family picture. There is a kid who is running, his mother is sitting by his side on the floor, and his father is sitting on the table with an open newspaper and he is paying attention to his child. This room is made of many wooden furniture, a desk, a chandelier, a desk, chairs, floor, and something in the middle of the room.
My husband and I are    looking forward to child-rearing. We would like to raise our children together feeding them, playing at the park, going to amusement parks, teaching them, etc.

1. Add the preposition "like" in order to clearly demonstrate what it is that the picture is portraying.
2. Rewrite this sentence in order to correct the wrong word order and fix the agreement mistakes.
3. A better and more natural way of phrasing this sentence.
4. Add a comma and the indefinite article "a" in order to clearly separate the chandelier from the desk.
5. The word "very" is redundant in this phrase and should be removed.
6. Add a hyphen between the words "child" and "rearing".
7. In order to correct the wrong word order and fix the agreement mistakes, you need to rewrite these phrases.
Yes, you're right. This looks like a picture of a family. Does their home resemble a typical Japanese home? How many children would you like to have?

We will leave it natural way.
I don't think this home resemble a typical Japanese home. This room-design is categorized in a modern room and this room is very simple, also organized. The two pots of plants interact with wooden surfaces to produce a natural image.

自然な表現

We will leave it the natural way.
I don't think this home resembles a typical Japanese home. This room-design is categorized in a modern room and this room is very simple, also organized. The two pots of plants interact with wooden surfaces to produce a natural image.

1. Add the definite article "the" before the word "nature" in order to specify it.
2. The correct verb form to use in this sentence is "resembles".
I agree. Their apartment looks very modern and cozy. I wonder if the boy from the picture has a brother or sister. What do you think? By the way, do you have a brother or a sister maybe?

That would be wonderful if the boy had a sibling. I have a little sister. I've always thought that if I had more siblings.

自然な表現

That would be wonderful if the boy had a sibling. I have a little sister. I've always wondered what it would be like if I had more siblings.

1. A better and more natural way of writing this sentence.

関連単語

  • child（子供）
  • newspaper（新聞紙）
  • light（電灯）
  • houseplant（観葉植物）
  • shirt（シャツ）

関連フレーズ

  • There is a houseplant beside the wall.（観葉植物が壁のそばに置いてあります。）
  • A woman is wearing a blue shirt.（女性が青いシャツをきています。）
  • There is a light hanging from the ceiling.（天井からライトがぶら下がっています。）
  • A child seems to be running after something.（子供が何かを追いかけているように見えます。）
  • A man is reading the newspaper.（男性が新聞を読んでいます。）

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