クッションの写真描写をしてみよう

Describe a picture of a cushion
写真を見て内容の説明をしてください
綿や羽毛などを詰めたふわふわなクッションは、椅子やソファーなどに置かれることが多いインテリアグッズです。ソファは衝撃を和らげてくれたり、椅子に座る際に座り心地を良くしてくれるのはもちろん、多くのカラーバリエーションがあるので部屋の装飾としても活躍をしてくれる存在です。クッションは「衝撃を和らげてくれる」という意味も持つため、クッションは「モノ」としてでなく日常会話でも「ワンクッション入れる」のような言葉として使用されたりもしています。
Please describe this picture.
 
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Please describe this picture.

There are 8 cushions in the center of this picture. There are two fences on the side of the picture. There is a blue curtain behind the cushions, and there is a big window. I can see some tall buildings, and some green. I think that this picture was taken during summer, because if it's autumn or winter, the light would be colder and there would be no green, and if it's spring, the light should be more brighter.

自然な表現

There are 8 cushions in the center of this picture. There are two fences on the side of the picture. There is a blue curtain behind the cushions, and there is a big window. I can see some tall buildings and some green. I think that this picture was taken during summer because if it's autumn or winter, the light would be colder and there would be no green, and if it's spring, the light should be brighter.
 

1`. The word 'building' does not need a comma because you only mentioned two things.
2. The word summer does not need a comma after because you used a conjunction word 'because'.
3. There is a double comparative between 'more and brighter', remove the word 'more'.
Okay, that's a good description. It looks they are many cushions in the room. Do you like to decorate your house with cushions?

Well, my mother decorates inside the house, so I decorate my room. I don't have any cushions in my room right now, but I'm planning to buy one that I like. I really like cushions because I can roll over it and relieve my stress. Though, I don't think I would need this much, because my room is kind of small.

自然な表現

Well, my mother decorated inside the house and I decorated my room. I don't have any cushion in my room right now, but I'm planning to buy one that I like. I like cushions because I can roll over them and relieve my stress. Though, I don't think I would need this much, because my room is kind of small.
 

1. The correct way of writing the sentence.
2. The word 'really' you used is not necessary.
3. The correct pronoun is 'them'.
I understand. What do you think this particular room is used for? It looks beautiful, but what is it?

I think it's a place to relax, for people who have stress. This is because if I came here and sleep here, I think my stress would go away. It is very good for people to relieve their stress, because if they have stress, they may destroy things around them, or maybe they could hurt other people.

自然な表現

I think it's a place to relax, for people who have stress. This is because if I come here I will sleep, I will be relieved from stress. It is very good for people to relieve their stress, because if they have stress, they may destroy things around them, or maybe they could hurt other people.
 

1. The correct way of writing the sentence.
That could very well be the case. Would you like to have a place liker this in your house. Have you stayed in a room like this when you travelled somewhere?

No, I never stayed in a place this colorful with a lot of cushions. However, I would like to stay in a place like this because I have a lot of stress that I would like to relieve in a place like this.

自然な表現

No, I never stayed in a place this colorful, with a lot of cushions. However, I would like to stay in a place like this because I have a lot of stress that I would like to relieve in a place like this.
 

1. Add a comma after the word 'colorful' to correct grammar.
Staying in a comfortable place like the one in the picture surely helps reduce stress levels. Why are you stressed?

I am stressed about school right now, because I have to do a lot of homework, and also I have P.E. class, too. My science teacher makes us write the correct answer three times on our notebook, but I can remember even without that system, so I get stressed about it. Also, in P.E. class we have to do softball and judo, and I don't like to run for a long way during the softball games, and I've heard that judo hurts a lot.

自然な表現

I am stressed about school right now, because I have to do a lot of homework, and also I have a P.E. class, too. My science teacher makes us write the correct answer three times in our notebook, but I can remember even without that system, so I get stressed about it. Also, in P.E. class we have to do softball and judo, and I don't like to run for a long way during the softball games, and I've heard that judo hurts a lot.
 

1. The word 'PE' is missing an article 'a'.
2. The correct preposition to use is 'in' because it refers to something which is inside something.

関連単語

  • through the window（窓を通して）
  • sunlight（日光）
  • cushion（クッション）
  • curtain（カーテン）
  • different color（さまざまな色）

関連フレーズ

  • There are many cushions in the room.（部屋にクッションがたくさん置いてあります。）
  • There are a variety of colored cushions.（さまざまな色のクッションがあります。）
  • There is a curtain beside the window.（窓のそばにカーテンがかかっています。）
  • I can see a wonderful landscape through the window.（窓を通してすばらしい景色が見渡せます。）
  • The sunlight is coming into the room.（部屋に日光が差し込んでいます。）

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