運動会の写真描写をしてみよう

Describe a picture of sports meeting
写真を見て内容の説明をしてください
運動会は小学校や中学校で楽しまれる行事です。日本人にとっては馴染みのある行事ですが、海外ではとても珍しいイベントです。海外では陸上スポーツを競うイベントはありますが、写真の玉入れをはじめ、大玉ころがしやパン食い競争などは日本固有の競技です。外国人の友人に日本の文化について紹介をしてあげる機会があったときには、日本の運動会を説明してあげるとよいかもしれません。
Please describe this picture.
 
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Please describe this picture.

A sports day is being held at the primary school. A ball throwing competition is taking place now.

自然な表現

A sports day is being held at the primary school. A ball-throwing competition is taking place now.

1. Here's an alternative "currently taking place"
Good. Please continue providing descriptions. Let's go to the children. What do they look like? What are they wearing?

Thanks for the confirmation. I will describe the child. They are probably in 3rd or 4th grade in the Japanese grade system.
Their ages are betweem 8 to 10 years old.
They are wearing red caps and PE uniforms. The PE uniform is a white short-sleeved pullover and navy blue half pants. They wear socks and shoes of their choice.

自然な表現

Thanks for the confirmation. I will describe the children. They are probably in the 3rd or 4th grade in the Japanese grade system.
Their ages are between 8 to 10 years old.
They are wearing red caps and PE uniforms. The PE uniform is a white short-sleeved pullover and navy blue half pants. They are wearing socks and shoes of their choice.

1. Fix the agreement mistake here by making use of the plural form. You are referring to a plural noun.
2. The definite article ("the'')is used before a noun to define it as something specific (e.g., something previously mentioned or known, something unique, or something being identified by the speaker).
3. Change your verb form to fix the subject-verb agreement here.
Well done. Let's move on to the audience. Please give descriptions of the audience. Include where they are and how many are there.

It is a large audience. Most of them are family members of the children. The audience surrounds the schoolyard. Behind them is the school building.
There are also several tents. The elderly and the handicapped are sitting on chairs in front of the tents.

自然な表現

It is a large audience. Most of them are family members of the children. The audience surrounds the schoolyard. Behind them is the school building.
There are also several tents. The elderly and the handicapped are sitting on chairs in front of the tents.

1. Here's an alternative "is seated around"
  • a sports meeting(運動会)
  • ball-toss game, in which balls are thrown into a basket(玉入れ)
  • compete(競争する)
  • gym uniform(体育着)
  • participate(参加する)
  • This is one of the famous events to be carried out at the elementary school sports meet.(これは小学校の運動会で行われる有名な競技の一つです。)
  • Many parents visit sport events to support their children.(自分の子を応援しようとたくさんの保護者が運動会を訪れます。)
  • Many children are looking forward to the sport meeting.(多くの子供は運動会を楽しみにしています。)
  • The sports meeting will be held in the autumn.(運動会は秋に行われます。)
  • At Japanese sports events, we divide children into red and white teams.(日本の小学校の運動会では赤チームと白チームに別れて得点を争います。)

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