自転車の写真描写をしてみよう

Describe a picture of a bicycle

写真を見て内容の説明をしてください

自転車での移動は現在ではエコな移動手段としても注目されています。道路にも自転車専用レーンが出来たり、今後さらに自転車は利用される機会が増えてくると考えられます。また自転車はサイクリング等のレジャーのアイテムとして、そして競輪等のスポーツ競技等にも使用され、多くの場面で人と共にある存在です。

Please describe this picture.

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Please describe this picture.

In this picture, a man is riding a bicycle in the park. He wears a gray long-sleeve shirt and a blue pants.There are many trees and few people in the park.

自然な表現

In this picture, a man is riding a bicycle in the park. He's wearing a gray long-sleeve shirt and _ blue pants. There are many trees and few people in the park.

1. Use the present progressive here as you are describing an ongoing situation.
2. No need for an article before non-specific, plural nouns.

That was a great description of the given picture. What vibe does that picture give you? Can you describe the picture's atmosphere, please?

Considering his clothes, it's a confortable temperature. I can see a tree that has red leaves over there. I guess it's autumn. I think it is the best season for cycling.

自然な表現

Considering his clothes, there's a comfortable temperature. I can see a tree that has red leaves over there. I guess it's autumn. I think it's the best season for cycling.

1. Use this adverb + the verb be to indicate the existence of something.
2. Spelling.
3. Try to use contractions to make your sentences sound more idiomatic.

That was a good observation. You have a great guess about the season. Do you like riding a bicycle as well? Do you think that picture was taken in Japan?

Yes, I used to ride a road bike. That has a drop angle handlebars and thin tires. I really enjoyed riding it, but I don't have it anymore. Because every time I rode the bike, I felt scary. The thin tires make me slip and fall down easily. Cyclists have to ride in the car's lane and sometimes cars drive quite near me. It's so dangerous.
I have no idea if this picture was taken in Japan. The man looks a western guy, but those trees seem like they are popular in Japan.

自然な表現

Yes, I used to ride a road bike that had _ drop-angle handlebars and thin tires. I really enjoyed riding it, but I don't have it anymore because every time I rode the bike, I felt scared. The thin tires made me slip and fall down easily. Cyclists have to ride in the car's lane and sometimes cars drive quite near me. It's so dangerous.
I have no idea if this picture was taken in Japan. The man looks like a western guy, but those trees seem like they're popular in Japan.

1, 6. Use the simple past here as you’re describing a past situation.
2. No need for an article before non-specific, plural nouns.
3. Add a hyphen when using two or more words as a singular adjective.
4. You should never start a new statement with this conjunction as it is supposed to connect sentences, not start them.
5. Use "scary" when describing something and "scared" when describing how you feel about something.
7. Add this preposition when you mean "similar to".
8. Try to use contractions to make your sentences sound more idiomatic.

Thank you for further adding those details. Do a lot of people use bicycles to commute to work in your country?

Some people including me commute by bicycle. But compared with western countries, those people are fewer in Japan. I can imagine
some reasons.
First, many Japanese work until late at night every day. They are too tired to ride a bicycle after work. Second, many roads are not cyclist-friendly. Third, drivers aren't familiar with sharing the lanes with cyclists. So, some drivers don't pay attention to bicycles and sometimes they are mean to cyclists.

自然な表現

Some people, including me, commute by bicycle, but compared with western countries, those people are fewer in Japan. I can imagine some reasons.
First, many Japanese work until late at night every day. They're too tired to ride a bicycle after work. Second, many roads aren't cyclist-friendly. Third, drivers aren't used to sharing the lanes with cyclists, so some drivers don't pay attention to bicycles and sometimes they're mean to cyclists.

1, 5. This conjunction can never start a separate statement, so you should always use a comma before it, not a period.
2, 3, 6. Try to use contractions to make your sentences sound more idiomatic.
4. Use "be used to" when referring to a habit.

I understand. It must be difficult to consider both parties as they have logical reasons for it. What should be done?

I think we should learn how to get along with each other at a driving school. Also, cyclists have to obtain manners on the road. As I just mentioned, some drivers are mean, but some cyclists don't have good manners to ride on a bicycle.

自然な表現

1. No need for a preposition after the verb "ride".

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