洋服の写真描写をしてみよう

Describe a picture of a dress
写真を見て内容の説明をしてください
洋服とは西洋から服が伝来してきた際に、和式の服と区別する為に「洋」服と名付けられたものですが、現在では「服」と聞けば自然と洋服を思い浮かべる方が多いと思います。服の目的には、外気から肌を守ることと、ファッション性や個性の主張、チームの統一感を出すこと等が考えられますね。
Please describe this picture.
 
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Please describe this picture.

There are many wooden hangers. Various color blouses are on the hangers. For example, there is a white blouse, and a navy cutsew with white stripes. Maybe it is in a big closet or in an apparel store.

自然な表現

There are many wooden hangers. Multicolor blouses are on the hangers. For example, there are a white blouse and a navy cutsew with white stripes. Maybe they are in a big closet or in an apparel store.

1. Do you mean blouses in various colors?
2. The verb should be plural because you mentioned more than one thing in your object.
3. The subject and verb should be plural because you are referring back to the main topic "Blouses" which is a plural noun.
Thank you for describing this picture. Do you usually hang all your clothes or fold them before keeping in your closet?

I hang some of my clothes, for example, jackets, pants, and blouses. Most of them are my working clothes. On the other hand, I fold some clothes, T-shirts and so on.

自然な表現

I hang some of my clothes, for example, jackets, pants, and blouses. Most of them are my working clothes. On the other hand, I fold some clothes such as T-shirts and so on.

1. Just like how you said it before (for example), in this case, you should use something similar too to introduce what kind of clothes you fold.
I see. Who does the laundry for the entire household? Do you always use a washing machine to wash all your clothes?

I do the laundry. I usually use a washing machine, but I sometimes use a laundry shop, for example, for jackets and coats.

自然な表現

I do the laundry. I usually use a washing machine, but I sometimes use a laundry service, for example, for jackets and coats.

1. To be precise, you don't use the "shop" to wash your clothes but the service.
I see what you mean by that. Do you like to buy expensive clothes that you can use for special occasions?

No, I'm not interested in buying expensive dresses for special occasions, for example wedding ceremonies. I usually borrow a dress or a kimono from a rental shop for those occasions. I don't use those clothes frequently, so it is not necessary for me.

自然な表現

No, I'm not interested in buying expensive dresses for special occasions, for example, wedding ceremonies. I usually borrow a dress or a kimono from a rental shop for those occasions. I don't wear those clothes frequently, so it is not necessary for me to buy them.

1. Don't forget to add a comma after "For Example" to introduce a list of examples.
2. I suggest using the exact verb for all those clothes. "use" is too generic and ambiguous.
3. It sounded incomplete so I suggest adding this last part to make your intention or overall speech clearer.

関連単語

  • clothes（洋服）
  • long sleeves（長袖）
  • hang clothes （ハンガーにかける）
  • wooden（木製の）
  • try on（試着する）

関連フレーズ

  • There are several clothes on the hanger.（ハンガーにはいくつかの服がかけられています。）
  • They are long sleeved, not short sleeved.（半袖ではなく長袖です。）
  • I purchase clothes after trying them on.（私は試着してから洋服を購入します。）
  • I always buy clothes at the same shops. （いつも決められたお店の服を買います。）
  • Recently, I could purchase clothes by mail order (computer).（最近では通販でも洋服が買えます。）

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