病院の写真描写をしてみよう

Describe a picture of a hospital
写真を見て内容の説明をしてください
調子が悪く病院に行くときには自分の症状に合った診療科を選択することが重要です。また大病を患う前に、予防として健康診断医に定期的に通うことも病院の大きな活用方法なのではないでしょうか。
Please describe this picture.
 
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Please describe this picture.

A man with silver hair is lying on a bed, and he is talking with a nurse who is wearing a white blouse and a pink stethoscope. She is smiling. In the room, there is a TV and a woody shelf. Maybe there is in a hospital and the man is hospitalized.

自然な表現

A man with grey hair is lying on a bed, and he is talking with a nurse who is wearing a white blouse and a pink stethoscope. She is smiling. In the room, there is a TV and a wooden shelf. Maybe that is    a hospital, and the man is hospitalized.

1. The noun "grey" means "(of a color) intermediate between black and white, as of ashes or lead".
2. The adjective "wooden" means "made of wood".
3. Use the pronoun "that" when referring to a specific thing previously mentioned, known, or understood.
4. No need for this preposition, it's redundant.
5. You need a comma before the conjunction "and" because it's followed by an independent clause.
Thank you for your description. Would you like to add something else? What information can you get from it?

The man is wearing a light blue wear, and lying on a bed with light green pillow and blanket. Maybe he has been in the room for several days or months, and he will be able to go out soon. They are smiling.

自然な表現

The man is wearing a light blue hospital gown and lying on a bed with a light green pillow and blanket. Maybe he has been in the room for several days or months, and he will be able to get out soon. They are smiling.

1. The noun "hospital gown" means "a robe worn by a patient in a hospital". In addition, you don't need a comma before the conjunction "and" because it's not followed by an independent clause.
2. You need the indefinite article "a" when referring to a non-specific, singular noun mentioned for the first time, in this case, modified by an adjective.
3. The verb "to get" means "to move to a different place or into a different position".
You made good points in your observation. What is the possible age of the man? How old is he? Why can he be hospitalized?

I think that he is fifties or sixties from his appearance. I'm not sure the reason why he is in the hospital, but he looks without heavy injuries, so maybe he is there because of some illness.We should take care of ourselves especially over thirties or forties because we get illness more easily than before.

自然な表現

I think that he is in his fifties or sixties from his appearance. I'm not sure the reason why he is in the hospital, but he looks without heavy injuries, so maybe he is there because of some illness.    We should take care of ourselves, especially after our thirties or forties because we get sick more easily than before.

1. The preposition "in" is used when referring approximately to someone's age or the weather temperature.
2. The determiner "his" is used to denote "belonging to or connected with a man, boy, or male animal that has just been mentioned or is known about".
3. You need to put a space between the full stop at the end of the sentence and the beginning of the next sentence.
4. A comma is used before "especially" when "especially" is used to set off a parenthetical clause, usually at the end of a sentence.
5. The preposition "after" is used to denote "following in time, place, or order".
6. The pronoun "our" is used to denote belonging to or connected with us; the possessive form of we, used before a noun.
7. The adjective "sick" means "affected by physical or mental illness".
  • grateful(感謝する)
  • clean(清潔な)
  • operation(手術)
  • lie down(横たわる)
  • equipment(設備)
  • He looks grateful for everything the nurse did for him.(彼はナースが彼のためにしてくれたことすべてに対して感謝しているように見えます。)
  • The hospital is always kept clean.(病院はいつも清潔に保たれています。)
  • The operation was a success.(手術は成功しました。)
  • He is laying down on the bed.(彼はベットの上で横になっています。)
  • We have the latest medical equipment.(最新の医療機器が備わっています。)

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