白鳥の写真描写をしてみよう

Describe a picture of Swans
写真を見て内容の説明をしてください
日本で白鳥は、おそらく真っ白で美しい鳥とのイメージがあるかと思います。優雅な印象を抱く方もいらっしゃるかもしれません。日本において白鳥は、秋ごろに北海道や本州に渡来し、春が訪れる頃には飛び立ってしまう渡り鳥です。彼らはあの寒い北海道にさえ、「越冬」しに来るようです。日本はまだ温暖な地域なのでしょう。そんな白鳥ですが、実は生まれたての頃は灰色をしています。
Please describe this picture.
 
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Please describe this picture.

There are six swans are floating on the water. I guess here is a lake. Swans are migrant birds which move lake to lake, aren't they?
Swans doesn't stop by in my neighborhood though when I got a chance to watch them, every time I'm captivated by them. They are magnetic bird.

自然な表現

There are six swans are floating on the water. I guess there is a lake. Swans are migrant birds which move lake to lake, aren't they?
Swans don't stop by in my neighborhood though when I got a chance to watch them, every time I'm captivated by them. They are the magnetic bird.

1 - This what you meant
2 - The verb needs to agree with the subject
3 - Use the article "the" as you're referring to a specific "bird"
I think swans are one of the most beautiful birds. Did you know male and female swans are bounded for life? By the way, what is your favorite animal?

I didn't know that. What do you think about that?
My favorite animal is dolphins which is a bull's eye. This is a home-run!!

自然な表現

I didn't know that. What do you think about that?
My favorite animal is dolphins which are a bull's eye. This is a home-run!!

1 - The verb needs to agree with the subject
I love dolphins too. They are so cute and playful. Have you ever seen a dolphin? Do you live by the sea?

Yes, I have seen them. I don't live by the sea though a aquarium is at accessible place.

自然な表現

Yes, I have seen them. I don't live by the sea through an aquarium is at an accessible place.

1 - You meant "through"
2 - The correct article is "an" because the next beginning letter is a vowel
3 - Use the article "a" as you're referring to one "place"

関連単語

  • a group of~（〜の群れ）
  • same（同じ）
  • lake（湖）
  • beak（くちばし）
  • stretch（伸ばす）

関連フレーズ

  • There are some swans swimming nearby.（いくつかの白鳥の群れが近寄って泳いでいます。）
  • All of them are the same color.（みんな同じ色をしています。）
  • They look cold swimming in the lake.（湖で泳いでいてみんな寒そうです。）
  • One swan has a different colored beak.（一匹の白鳥のくちばしの色は他とは違います。）
  • Some swans stretch their necks straight.（何匹かの白鳥は首をまっすぐに伸ばしています。）

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