森の写真描写をしてみよう

Describe a picture of forests
写真を見て内容の説明をしてください
森の中にいるとリラックスが出来たり、癒されるように感じる方も多いでしょう。森は太陽光を遮ってくれたり、そよ風に揺れて心地のよい音を奏でてくれたりしてくれます。森は私達人間だけでなく、地球にとってもかけがえのない存在です。森は多くの生物を養い、その落ち葉は土壌を豊かにし、彼らの根は水を貯蔵してくれたり土壌を強固にしてくれます。我々が呼吸で消費している酸素も森が作りだしてくれています。近年森林破壊が問題になっていますが、私達一人一人が森の尊さに感謝をして、資源を大切に生活をするべきですね。
Please describe this picture.
 
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Please describe this picture.

A female senior citizen is walking with a parasol. She is wearing pants and a jacket, and has a black handbag in her right hand.

自然な表現

A female senior citizen is walking with a parasol. She is wearing pants and a jacket, and has a black handbag in her right hand.

1. Your original expression is grammatically correct. This is just an alternative: "on her right arm/ shoulder". "On" is used when the bag's strap is slung.
Okay, good. Thank you for describing this picture. You did well. How do you know she is a senior citizen?

I imagined it from the way she stood. Her back looks a little rounded. She also wears clothes that Japanese women of middle age or older prefer.

自然な表現

I imagined it from the way she stands. Her back looks a little rounded. She also wears clothes that Japanese women of middle age or older prefer.

1. Please don't mix the Tenses. Use the Present Tense consistently because you used it the first time.
Those are good observations. Where is the woman walking? Can you now describe what is surrounding her?

Thank you.
Let me describe her surroundings.
She is walking on a paved road.
Trees are planted at equal intervals on both sides of the path, and young buds are sprouting.
The season seems to be spring.
The location seems to be the road to a famous garden.

自然な表現

Thank you.
Let me describe her surroundings.
She is walking on a paved path.
Trees are planted at equal intervals on both sides of the path, and young buds are sprouting.
The season appears to be spring.
The location could be the path to a famous garden.

1. "Road" isn't the appropriate expression in this context. It refers to a wide way that connects cities and towns.
2. "Appear" is better than "seem" because there's a focus on appearance. Also, "seem" tends to be weaker or less sure.
3. You don't need to repeat the same word; just use a Synonym.
4. "Road" isn't the appropriate expression in this context. It refers to a wide way that connects cities and towns.

関連単語

  • get a tan（日焼けする）
  • protect（守る）
  • on one's way（～へ行く途中）
  • grow（育つ、生える）
  • hold（持つ）

関連フレーズ

  • She always carries an umbrella in order not to get a tan.（彼女は日焼けをしないためにいつも傘を持ち歩いています。）
  • The umbrella protects her skin from the sunshine.（傘が日差しから肌を守ってくれます。）
  • She is on her way to the station.（駅に行く途中です。）
  • There are trees growing along the street.（道に沿って木が生えている。）
  • She is walking in the street, holding her bag in her right hand.（鞄を右手にさげて道を歩いています。）

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