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Describe a picture of Nio Guardians
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寺院の表門の左右に置かれている事の多い仁王像ですが、彼らの鋭い目つきや頑健な体つきを見て、気持ちが引き締まる経験がある方も多いと思います。一般的に仁王像と呼ばれる彼らは金剛力士像と言い、口をあけている方が阿行、口をふさいでいる力士像が吽行と言います。その様子から「仁王立ち」という言葉も生まれ、力強さの象徴としても日本人に親しい存在です。
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Please describe this picture.

This is Japanese traditional statue called "Niou Zou". It means twin gurdians which protect at the entrance of temple.

自然な表現

This is a Japanese traditional statue called "Niou Zou". It means twin gurdians which protect      the entrance of the temple.

1. Use indefinite articles the first time you mention a countable noun: ''a'' for nouns starting with consonant sounds and ''an'' for words beginning with vowel sounds.
2. ''at'' is not necessary.
3. Use a definite article for something specific.
Thank you for the description. Can you provide more details about the Niou Zou statue in the picture? For instance, its physical features, any specific symbolism, or the context in which it is placed at the entrance of a temple.

Thank you for asking. Niou zou is a Buddizm gardians. They looks very strong body with thik muscle. They are also aremed with some weapons such as a stick or sword. I'm not sure the precisely religious meanings of them, but they must protect temples and the people gathering in site from some of the evil beings.

自然な表現

Thank you for asking. Niou zou is a Buddizm guardian. They look very strong with thick muscles. They are also armed with some weapons such as a stick or sword. I'm not sure of the precise religious meanings of them, but they must protect temples and the people gathering on site from some of the evil beings.

1. 3. Spelling correction.
2. Rephrase for clarity.
4. Use ''of'' to mean relating to something.
5. Change the word form.
Your description provides a vivid image of the Niou Zou guardians. The muscular physique and armed stance suggest a protective role. In your opinion, how do these statues contribute to the overall atmosphere and spiritual significance of the temple entrance?

That's interesting point of view. When we are approaching the gate of the temple,Niou zou guardians are glaring daggers at us, so we could feel something solemn. They work a kind of switch to realize for us to be here sacred place.

自然な表現

That's an interesting point of view. When we are approaching the gate of the temple,    Niou zou guardians are glaring daggers at us, so we can feel something solemn. They work a kind of switch to make us realise that we are in a sacred place.

1. Use indefinite articles the first time you mention a countable noun: ''a'' for nouns starting with consonant sounds and ''an'' for words beginning with vowel sounds.
2. Use the correct spacing.
3. Use ''can'' to indicate ability.
4. Rephrase to make the meaning clear.

関連単語

  • temple（寺）
  • statue（像）
  • strong（強い）
  • guardian（守役）
  • a searching look（鋭い目つき）

関連フレーズ

  • This statue looks like it is about to attack.（この銅像は今にも襲いかかって来そうに見えます。）
  • The statue is nude, however there are decorations on its head.（像は裸ですが、頭の上に飾りを付けています。）
  • The oldest Nio guardians in Japan are in Horyuji Temple.（日本で一番古い仁王像は法隆寺にあります。）
  • The statue is made of wood.（像は木製です。）
  • Temples have Nio guardians while shrines have guardian dogs.（お寺には仁王像がいる事にいる事に対して神社には狛犬がいます。）

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