結婚式の写真描写をしてみよう

Describe a picture of a wedding ceremony
写真を見て内容の説明をしてください
結婚式は、男女が婚姻を成立させるため、又はそれを確認する為に行う儀式です。この式典は当事者の男女はもちろん、彼らを祝う親族や友人、皆が幸せな気持ちになる儀式です。この結婚式は宗教や文化と深く結び付いているため、世界中様々な結婚式の方法があります。日本固有の神前結婚式や、ウェディングドレスを着る教会結婚式等、日本でも数種類の結婚式を確認することができます。
Please describe this picture.
 
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Please describe this picture.

They look a couple of newlyweds.

自然な表現

They look like a newlywed couple.

1. Use ''like'' to compare things.
2. Use ''newlywed couple'' as it is more precise.
Why do you say they are newlyweds? What are they wearing? Could you tell more about their appearance?

A bride and groom are wearing wedding dress and tuxedo. Those bright colors are typical custume.

自然な表現

The woman is wearing a wedding dress and the man a tuxedo, typical clothes for newlyweds. In addition, the bright colors are typical wedding costumes. 

1. Restructure for clearer meaning.
2. Rewrite for clearer meaning and spell ''costumes'' correctly.
How old do you think is the couple? Where do you think the couple is? By the way, have you ever attended a wedding ceremony?

I guess they're each early in 30's. They may be at the photo studio to shoot a wedding photos. I have attended several wedding ceremonies.

自然な表現

I guess they're in their early 30's. They may be at a photo studio to shoot    wedding photos. I have attended several wedding ceremonies.

1. Rephrae for clearer meaning.
2. Use indefinite articles the first time you mention a countable noun: ''a'' for nouns starting with consonant sounds and ''an'' for words beginning with vowel sounds.
3. Leave out the indefinite article as it may not be used with plural nouns.
  • wedding ceremony(結婚式)
  • wedding feast(結婚披露宴)
  • performance(出し物)
  • bouquet(ブーケ)
  • commemorative picture(記念撮影)
  • They are smiling while wearing a tuxedo and a dress.(彼らはタキシードとドレスを着て微笑んでいます。)
  • Weddings are a major life event.(結婚式は人生の一大イベントです。)
  • The wedding ceremony must be scheduled beforehand.(結婚式は前もって予定を立てなければいけません。)
  • The wedding ceremony is gorgeous.(結婚式はとても華やかなものです。)
  • Congratulations on your Wedding(ご結婚おめでとうございます。)

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