ビールの写真描写をしてみよう

Describe a picture of beer
写真を見て内容の説明をしてください
「まずはビール」と飲み会の席などで言われるほど、日本の飲酒文化においてビールは浸透しています。日本のブランドに加えて近年では海外から輸入されているものも多くあり、日本では多種多様なビールを飲むことができます。ニーズも多様なので、日本ではノンアルコールビールや発泡酒なども開発されています。日本のビールは海外でもとても人気で、東南アジアでも日本のブランドのビールを多く目にすることができます。とてもおいしいビールですが、もちろん、飲みすぎは要注意です。
Please describe this picture.
 
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Please describe this picture.

A man and a woman are in a room, sitting on a white sofa, drinking some beverages from a can. He is wearing a green shirt, and she is wearing a flower-printed top and a white cardigan. Lace curtains are hanging over a window behind them, so we can't see the outside, but it seems already evening.

自然な表現

A man and a woman are in a living room, sitting on a white sofa, drinking some beverages from a can. He is wearing a green shirt, and she is wearing a flower-printed top and a white cardigan. Lace curtains are hanging over a window behind them, so we can't see   outside, but it seems that it is already evening.

1. You can specify which room it is. 'Room' is not an apartment.
2. Article is not needed here.
3. You should use 'that' as a conjunction here. Verb 'to be' is needed here.
What do the setting of the room, the clothing of the man and woman, and the presence of lace curtains suggest about the relationship between the man and woman and the time of day in the picture?

I assume they are a married couple living together in this house.
I'm not sure about their life patterns, but drinking together must be their common interest.

自然な表現

I assume they are a married couple living together in this house.
I'm not sure about their lifestyle, but drinking together must be their common interest.

1. This is a better word choice, how you live. 'Life patterns' is not used.
Yes, that's just what I am thinking. Approximately how old would you estimate the man and woman to be?

They look around 30 years old. They might not have children.

自然な表現

They look like they are around 30 years old. They might not have any children.

1. This was added for better expression. Subject is needed here. Who is 30 years old?
2. This was added for better expression, one or more children.

関連単語

  • to enjoy alcohol（酒を楽しむ）
  • give yourself over to drink（酒に溺れる）
  • give up drinking（酒をやめる）
  • wasted（酔っぱらう）
  • Japanese sake（日本酒）

関連フレーズ

  • They are drinking beer.（彼らはビールを飲んでいます。）
  • They are in a close relationship.（彼らは親しい関係です。）
  • In Japan, we often drink alcohol at night.（日本では夜にお酒を飲むことが多いです。）
  • It goes well with alcohol on Friday nights.（金曜日の夜はお酒が進みます。）
  • He can drink a lot of alcohol.（彼はお酒が強いです。）

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