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フェイシャルエステの写真描写をしてみよう

Describe a picture of Facial beauty

写真を見て内容の説明をしてください

フェイシャルエステは近年アンチエイジングのため、あるいはリラックスのために利用されるエステです。顔はいちばん多くの人に見られる体の部位であり、きれいに保ちたいと思う方々も多くいるかと思います。施術台の上に寝転がって目をつむり、顔のマッサージを受けていると気持ちがよくて寝てしまう方もいるでしょう。このフェイシャルエステは近年ではリラックスできるスポットとしてホテルやリゾートにも備え付けられている場合も多くあります。旅行した際、あるいは自分へのご褒美にフェイシャルエステを受けるのもよいかもしれません。

Please describe this picture.

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Please describe this picture.

A woman is taking a facial massage from esthetician. She closed eyes and closed mouth.

自然な表現

A woman is having a facial massage done by an esthetician. She closes her eyes and closes her mouth.

1. This is a better word to use in this context. Use 'take' when referring to common activities such as resting (take a rest), eating (eat a meal), etc but use 'have' in this context since there is an object which is 'facial massage.'
2. Add this to indicate action
3. Use this preposition to indicate the one who acts.
4. Add an indefinite article as the noun is not specific.
5 and 7. Use the present simple tense form of the verb as you are describing what is happening in the picture.
6 and 8. Add a possessive pronoun.

Thank you very much for your response. Well done on your first description of the picture. Please feel free to continue.

She has a towel wrapped around her body.
The towel color is brown, I don't have brown towel in my house.
This is because the towel is wipe the body from wet, it is not hide body.

自然な表現

She has a towel wrapped around her body.
The color of the towel is brown, I don't have a brown towel in my house.
This is because the towel is used to wipe the body from wetness, it is not to hide the body.

1. This is a more natural expression since "towel color" do not clearly express the idea that you want to convey.
2. Add an indefinite article.
3. Add this past participle form of the verb to complete the passive voice.
4 and 6. Add a preposition to form the infinitive.
5. Use this noun form to refer to the "condition of being wet."
7. Add a definite article.

Great observation. I also do not have brown towels in my house. Please carry on with the description of the picture.

The esthetician's nails are neatly cut for the customers. This hand is like a ceramic artist. I can't see any cream and oils.

自然な表現

The esthetician's nails are neatly cut for the customers. This esthetician's hands are like that of a ceramic artist. I can't see any cream and oils.

1. Add this word to tell whose hands are in the picture.
2. Use the plural form of the noun.
3. Use the plural form of the verb as the subject is plural.
4. Add a relative pronoun to refer back to "hands."
5. Add a preposition to connect the part to the whole.

Great observation. The esthetician is wearing a uniform. Did you manage to notice that? Can you see what color it is?

The esthetician wear the white color uniform. I didn't notice this point because back ground color is also white.
In addition, I found a small mole on the right hand.

自然な表現

The esthetician is wearing a white-colored uniform. I didn't notice this point because the background color is also white.
In addition, I found a small mole on the right hand.

1. Use the present progressive form of the verb or the simple present tense as you are describing the picture as it is captured in actual.
2. Add an indefinite article.
3. Add a hyphen and used the adjective form of the word as it is used to describe "uniform."
4. Add a definite article.
5. This is written as one word.

Great observation! Finding the small mole indicates how well you have been observation the picture. The client's hair is very beautiful. Can you tell what color it is?

Oh! She has a beautiful brown hair. I didn't notice that because hair color is same background color.
She doesn't have any mole in the face.

自然な表現

Oh! She has beautiful brown hair. I didn't notice that because the hair color is the same as the background color.
She doesn't have any mole in the face.

1. There is no need for an article as "hair" is uncountable.
2, 3 and 5. Add a definite article as the nouns are specified.
4. Add this indicate a comparison.

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