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She is wiping her sweat on her right side of her face with a sports towel along with she is looking upward slightly. She is smiling in full of enjoyment. She is wearing a yellow sports shirts with a zipper adjustment function. Her hair color is chestnut brown which is tied in one at her back.
She is wiping her sweat from the right side of her face with a sports towel while she is looking upward slightly. She is smiling _ full of enjoyment. She is wearing a yellow sports shirts with a zipper adjustment function. Her hair color is chestnut brown and her hair is tied _ at her back.
I think she was amid of exercising. Some unreadable letters are written in yellow on the towel.
It can't measure how important it proves safe and effective vaccines for COVID-19 under this essential situation. The breaking news said that U.S government will pay $1.95 billion for Pfizer to produce and deliver 100 million doses of its candidate.
I think she was amid _ exercise. Some unreadable letters are written in yellow on the towel.
It can't be measured how important it is to develop safe and effective vaccines for COVID-19 in this situation. _ Breaking news said that the U.S government will pay $1.95 billion to Pfizer to produce and deliver 100 million doses of its vaccine candidate.
2. A noun is needed here after 'amid' in this context. We could use 'exercise'.
3. The sentence "It can't measure how important it proves safe and effective vaccines for COVID-19 under this essential situation" is unclear. In English, it is very important to recognize the type of the words we use in our sentences, such as nouns, verbs, adverbs, adjectives, and so on, to know their function and to be able to connect clauses and parts of the sentence properly, this is especially important when we write complex sentences with more than one clause. Also, the basic form used is subject - verb - object, so we must know which word in our sentence or clause is the subject, which one is the verb, which one is the object, and so on. We should rephrase the whole sentence, here's an example of how to make the sentence grammatical, however, the sentence could be written differently depending on what you wanted to say. "It can't be measured how important it is to develop safe and effective vaccines for COVID-19 in this situation".
4. We use the definite article 'the' in front of a noun when we believe the listener/reader knows exactly what we are referring to. The listener/reader doesn't know which specific breaking news you referred to, it was mentioned for the first time, so the article 'the' should not be used here.
5. We use the definite article in front of a noun when we believe the listener/reader knows exactly what we are referring to. You're referring to a specific noun, specific 'government', so we need the definite article 'the' here.
6. The preposition 'to' is needed, we say 'tp pay money to someone'.
7. The noun 'vaccine' is needed here, you're referring to their 'vaccine candidate'.
I don't know about it. Everyone is in different circumstances and habitat. At least I would like to recommend mindfulness walking. This really works for everyone.
I don't know about it. People are in different circumstances and habitats. At least I would like to recommend mindfulness walking. This really works for everyone.
関連単語
- sweat（汗）
- puts a heavy emphasis（力を入れる）
- painful（痛み）
- a lot of promise（大きな可能性）
- struggle（苦労する）
関連フレーズ
- I break out in a sweat.（汗がだらだらと流れています。）
- I make it a point of taking a jog around the park every morning.（毎朝公園の周りを走ることが日課です。）
- Somehow, I was able to finish the race.（私はなんとか完走することができました。）
- I'm going to take part in a sport festival, which is held in my town.（町で開かれるスポーツフェスティバルに参加するつもりです。）
- It is proven that exercise is good for our health.（運動は健康によいと証明されています。）
こんな方にオススメ
2. We need 'her' before 'face', but here we should use 'the'. It's the right side of her face.
3. 'along with' doesn't fit here, we need 'while' (at the same time as).
4. The preposition 'in' is not needed here.
5. 'which' doesn't fit here, if we use it, it refers to her hair color, but the clause 'is tied' refers to her hair, not her hair color. We could use 'and' and start a new clause to properly refer to her hair, or say 'Her hair is chestnut brown and it's tied at her back'.
6. It may be unclear what 'in one' is referring to, either provide additional information or remove 'in one', it is enough to say 'and her hair is tied at her back'.