商品説明の写真描写をしてみよう

Describe a picture of product description
写真を見て内容の説明をしてください
商品がどんな商品かを説明したり、他社商品や既存商品との差異を分かりやすく説明すると良いでしょう。忘れてはいけないのが取引先企業への気配りです。取引先にとって何がメリットで、なぜ自社の商品を買うべきなのか、買うと決定したらどのような手順で納品まで進むのかを説明するのが大切です。そして、取引先の企業が日本企業とは限りません。その場合には、現地の文化や状況を理解する必要があります。このようにお客様に商品説明をする際には企業の状況や国の文化等、あらゆる情報を踏まえたうえで商品を気に行ってもらえるような紹介をすると良いでしょう。
Please describe this picture.
 
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Please describe this picture.

This is a picture of the inside of a reception room with some black luxury chairs. Two people in the room wear formal attire and sit on the chairs. The man is introducing something with a kind of brochure to the woman. The man must be a salesman, judging from his gesture. We can't use such a gesture with coworkers. So the woman might be a customer or client of him

自然な表現

This is a picture of the inside of a reception room with some black luxury chairs. Two people in the room are wearing formal attire and sitting on the chairs. The man is introducing something using a kind of brochure to the woman. The man must be a salesman, judging from his gesture. We can't use such a gesture with coworkers. So, the woman might be a customer or client of his.

1. & 2. You are talking about something happening in the present and still going on, so use the Present Continuous Tense.
3. This is a better phrase to use in this context.
4. The conjunction "so" is used at the beginning of a sentence to connect it with something that has been said or has happened previously and in this case, it has to be followed by a comma.
5. The determiner "his" is used to denote "belonging to or connected with a man, boy, or male animal that has just been mentioned or is known about". In addition, finish a declarative sentence with a full stop.
I am impressed by your description skills. Keep up the hard work. In your judgment, what kind of products is the man selling and why do you think that is?

Although it is difficult to make a proper judgment because I can't see clearly the material's content in the picture, I think I can see something like diagrams with color. If they are a kind of floor plan, he might be a real estate agent, and she is a client. She might be a representative of her company because we never go to such a real estate company in a suit when we try to borrow a house privately.

自然な表現

Although it is difficult to make a proper judgment because I can't see clearly the material's content in the picture, I think I can see something like diagrams with color. If they are a kind of floor plan, he might be a real estate agent, and she is a client. She might be a representative of her company because we never go to such a real estate company in a suit when we try to rent a house privately.

1. The verb "to rent" means "to pay someone for the use of something, typically property, land, or a car".
I see. Your hard work on this script is hugely impressive. What is your take on the idea of particular jobs having specific dresscodes? Do you think jobs should have a specific dresscode?

It depends on the job description. Some jobs need a kind of uniform, like police, where they must be distinct from others. There might be a case where the attire indicates the role of a group in the organization. In some cases, the clothes make our minds switch into work mode. However, I don't think these dress codes are always necessary. If we can work more without a dress code, we don't need it. Companies should judge whether dress codes are helpful for their work, and they should be abolished if it is useless.

自然な表現

It depends on the job description. Some jobs need a kind of uniform, like police, where they must be distinct from others. There might be a case where the attire indicates the role of a group in an organization. In some cases,    clothes make our minds switch into work mode. However, I don't think these dress codes are always necessary. If we can work more without a dress code, we don't need it. Companies should judge whether dress codes are helpful for their work, and they should be abolished if they are useless.

1. Use the indefinite article "an" when it precedes a non-specific noun or an adjective that starts with a vowel.
2. No need for a definite article here, you are talking about clothes in a broad sense.
3. The pronoun "they" is used as the subject of a verb to refer to people, animals, or things already mentioned or, more generally, to a group of people not clearly described.
4. The auxiliary verb needs to be equated with the pronoun in the 3rd person plural form now.
  • product(商品)
  • warranty period(品質保証期間)
  • durability(耐久性)
  • get down to business(仕事に取りかかる)
  • explain the product(商品説明をする)
  • This is a recommended product.(こちらがお勧めの商品です。)
  • Our company's product can't beat.(わが社の商品はほかに負けません。)
  • We can go into production right away.(すぐに製造に取り掛かることができます。)
  • You'll be able to stay within your budget.(予算内で納めることができます。)
  • Please confirm the conditions in advance.(あらかじめ条件をご確認ください。)

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