指示の写真描写をしてみよう

Describe a picture of instruction
写真を見て内容の説明をしてください
ビジネスにおいて、部下や上司とのコミュニケーションの円滑さはとても大切です。部下が上司に対して気を使うのはとても大切であり当然とも言えますが、上司からの部下への態度も良好な関係性の保持の為にはとても重要です。特に上司が部下に仕事を頼む時には、細心の注意を払ってあげるべきかもしれません。もし部下が作った資料が間違っているを指摘して改善を指示するならば、問題点と、改善すべき点を要点を絞って伝えてあげましょう。部下の資料において良かった箇所を褒めてあげても部下のモチベーションアップに繋がって良いかもしれません。ビジネスもいわば人と人の関係。指示をする際にも部下を気遣う事が必要かもしれません。
Please describe this picture.
 
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Please describe this picture.

A man who is sitting on the table is a manager of the man wearing a striped-shirt and the manager is giving suggestions about the layout of the document the employee made.

自然な表現

A man sitting on the table is a manager of the man wearing a striped shirt, and the manager is giving suggestions about the layout of the document the employee made.

1. "who is" was unnecessary, so we removed it.
2. Hyphen was unnecessary, so we removed it.
3. You were missing a comma before the coordinating conjunction "and" in a compound sentence.
I see, do you think he is giving positive or negative feedback? What kind of company do you think this is?

I feel that he is giving a positive feedback. He indicates the point where his college should improve.

自然な表現

I feel that he is giving positive feedback. He indicates the point where his college should improve.

1. The indefinite article "a" was redundant when used with the uncountable noun "feedback" in your sentence, so we removed it.
Ok, so you think he is trying to help his colleague improve. To me, the one who is receiving the feedback looks a little sad and disappointed. What do you think?

Yes, that's true. I think everybody feels disappointed when he was pointed out about his mistakes or insufficient output. However it is good for him to receive that kind suggestions. I definitely believe that it develops him and expand his possibilities.

自然な表現

Yes, that's true. I think everybody felt disappointed when he pointed out his mistakes or insufficient output. However, it is good for him to receive that kind of suggestion. I definitely believe that it develops him and expand his possibilities.

1. "feels" was in the wrong tense, so we changed it. The form of the verb changes depending on whether it refers to an event taking place in the past, present or future.
2. "was" was unnecessary, so we removed it.
3. "about" was unnecessary, so we removed it.
4. Comma was missing after the introductory phrase "However", so we added it.
5. This is a phrase which means "type of suggestion", so we rephrased it.

関連単語

  • direction（指示）
  • subordinate（部下）
  • revise（修正する）
  • submit（提出する）
  • tell A off（Aを叱る）

関連フレーズ

  • From the looks of this document, it seems to be about the restaurant business.（この資料を見る限りでは、飲食業に関するもののようです。）
  • He received directions from his superior.（その男性は上司から指示を受けている。）
  • His boss revised some contents of the document using a red pen.（上司は赤ペンで資料の内容をいくつか修正しています。）
  • He will revise the document again and will submit it to his boss.（彼はもう一度資料を修正して上司に提出するだろう。）
  • Could you give me some advice?（何かアドバイスをいただけませんか？）

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