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Describe a picture of a tie
写真を見て内容の説明をしてください
ビジネスシーンにおけるスーツスタイルの要となるのがネクタイ。第一印象が重要なビジネスの場において大切な役割を果たします。グレーやブラックなど落ち着いた色が多いスーツに比べ、ネクタイは色や柄、素材などさまざま。シーンに合わせることで相手に信頼感を与えられます。
Please describe this picture.
 
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Please describe this picture.

He is adjusting the position of his tie in front of a mirror.

自然な表現

A person is adjusting the position of his tie in front of a mirror.

1. We do not know who "he" is so this is a more natural way to start the sentence. "A person" or "a man" is adjusting his tie.
That's good. I think he's an office manager by the looks of his attire. Could you please describe what he is wearing?

He wears a striped navy suit. He will go to the office from now.

自然な表現

He is wearing a striped navy suit. He will go to the office from now.

1. Use the present tense to describe the picture. We use "he wears" for something that generally (usually) happens:
"He usually wears a navy suit."
Would you be able to say how old the person in the picture is? What industry do you think he belongs to?

I think he is in his 20s and he belongs to the financial industry. There are two reasons. First, he is not wearing a wedding ring. Second, he is wearing a not brightly colored suit. Office workers working in a financial company generally choice a suit like that.

自然な表現

I think he is in his 20s and he belongs to the financial industry. There are two reasons. First, he is not wearing a wedding ring. Second, he is wearing a not brightly colored suit. Office workers working in a financial company generally choose a suit like that.

1. We need a verb here. "Choice" is a noun and "Choose" is a verb.
Those are awesome observations that you have made. How do you relate to this individual? Do you have a particular dress code at your workplace?

No, I don't. I usually have a more casual dress code. This is because I work in the IT planning department and I don't have the opportunity to meet clients.

自然な表現

No, I don't. I usually have a more casual dress code. This is because I work in the IT planning department and I don't have the opportunity to meet clients.

1. Great paragraph! Here is just an alternative:
"I usually wear more casual clothing..."
Okay, that makes sense. Are there days that you need to wear formal clothing like days when you have meetings?

There is no day when I have to wear formal clothing. Therefore, my suits have been in my closet for 4 years.

自然な表現

There is no day when I have to wear formal clothing. Therefore, my suits have been in my closet for 4 years.

1. Great paragraph! Here is just an alternative:
"I don`t have any opportunities to wear formal clothing."

Great job! :)
  • tie(ネクタイ)
  • neck(首)
  • adjust a tie(ネクタイを直す)
  • a button down shirt(ボタンダウンシャツ)
  • a pinstriped suit(ピンストライプのスーツ)
  • He is tying his necktie in front of a mirror.(彼は鏡の前でネクタイを結んでいます。)
  • That man is about to untie his tie.(その男性はネクタイをほどくところです。)
  • He is choosing a tie that matches his suit.(彼はスーツに合うネクタイを選んでいます。)
  • He seems to be heading to work now.(彼はこれから仕事に向かうようです。)
  • This man is adjusting his tie so that it won't come loose.(この男の人はネクタイがほどけないように直しています。)

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