好きな花や植物について話してみよう

Let's talk about your favourite flowers and plants.

あなたは好きな花や植物について話しています。

あなたの好きな花や植物について特徴や思い出など話してみましょう。

Please tell me about your favourite flowers and plants.

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Please tell me about your favourite flowers and plants.

OK. My favorite flower is wheat. I have two reasons. As the first reason, the flower have strength which is patient. If it is stepped by people, it won't die. And it brings health for us.
I want to be inspiring like thet. As the second reason, we can make various food from it. For example, bread,pizza,hot cake and so on. Thank to it, my family is so happy.
For these reason above, I like wheat very much.

自然な表現

OK. My favorite plant is wheat. I have two reasons. The first reason is that this plant has strength . If it is stepped on by people, it doesn't die. In addition, it brings health to our lives.
I want to be inspiring like wheat. The second reason is that we can make various types of food from it. For example, bread, pizza, hot cakes and so on. Thanks to it, my family is so happy.
For the reasons above, I like wheat very much.

1. This is the correct word to use here because it is more common and it is what people usually say.
2. This is a clearer and more common way to express this idea
3. A third-person verb ending in s is needed here after 'plant'
4. This word is not needed because 'patient' is used with people
5. This is the correct preposition here because this word, step, accompanies the dependent preposition, on
6. A third-person verb ending in s is needed here after 'it'
7. This is the correct expression here because 'and' cannot begin a sentence
8. This is the correct preposition here because this word, health, accompanies the dependent preposition, to + lives
9. This is a clearer and more common way to express this idea
10. This is a clearer way to say this because a plural is needed after 'various'
11.13. A plural is needed here because you are talking in general or there are many
12. This is the correct expression here because it is clearer and more common.

I haven't heard of the wheat flower. Do you mean the wheat plant? It is indeed a useful plant which provides us with flour for making bread and other products.

Thank you for replying my message.
I thought wheat is very famous around the world.
I'm Japanese so I don't know foreign countries.
Wheat is cultivated in Japan.
The flower's color is green into gold like yellow in one year.
Also, we can make bread, naan in India, cake and so on.

自然な表現

Thank you for replying to my message.
I thought wheat was very famous around the world.
I'm Japanese so I don't know foreign countries.
Wheat is cultivated in Japan.
The plant's color turns from green to golden yellow in one year.
Also, we can make bread, naan in India, cakes, and so on.

1. This is the correct preposition here because this word, reply, accompanies the dependent preposition, to
2. A simple past tense is needed here after 'thought'
3. This is a clearer and more common way to express this idea

That is true. Wheat is grown in most countries of the world and it is beneficial.
We like to make homemade bread in my country. Do you make the bread yourself?

I don't know. Because I have never made the bread.
But I want to make the bread once.
I bring apple tea and eat the bread which is made by me with the tea.

自然な表現

I don't know. Because I have never made bread.
However, I want to try making bread.
I will bring apple tea and eat the bread which I've made with the tea.

1. This is an uncountable noun so no article
2. This is a clearer way to say this because 'but' cannot begin a sentence
3. This is a clearer and more common way to express this idea
4. This is the correct relative pronoun here referring to 'bread'

The homemade bread is so delicious. I buy bread from the store when I don't have time to bake it at home.
Apple tea sounds good. Do you like to cook?

Yes. But I don't often cook.
Because my mother often says thet don't use my kitchen.
I couldn't understand the means. But,nowadays, I am coming to understand it. Maybe my mother thinks that my son is kid, so it is dangerous to use fire in the kitchen.
My mother is very kind. But I'm 17 years.
I can be to use fire in the kitchen.

自然な表現

Yes. But I don't often cook.
This is because my mother often tells me not to use the kitchen.
I couldn't understand why. However, nowadays, I am coming to understand it. Maybe my mother thinks that my son is a kid, so it is dangerous to use the cooker in the kitchen.
My mother is very kind. But I'm 17 years old.
I can use the cooker in the kitchen.

1.7. This is the correct expression here because 'because' is a joining word
2. This is a clearer and more common way to express this idea
3. The definite article is needed here, as we know which one we are referring to, or there is only one
4.6. This is the correct word to use here because it is more common and it is what people usually say.
5. An indefinite article is needed here before a single countable noun of which there are many and you are referring to one of them

It seems your mother is overprotective and worried about you, which is normal for most mothers. Have you done something to show her that you are no longer a kid?

Someday, I want to show my mother the figure that I tried to do something with eagerly.
My mother will allow me to use the kitchen.
But I must clean the kitchen after cooking.

Thank you for reading and answering my talks.

自然な表現

Someday, I want to show my mother the figure that I tried to make.
My mother will allow me to use the kitchen.
But I must clean the kitchen after cooking.
Thank you for reading and answering my scripts.

1. This meaning is not clear. Please clarify with your speaking teacher.
2. This is the correct word to use here because it is more common and it is what people usually say.

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