会社のホームページのリニューアルをお願いしてみよう

Talking about changing your company's homepage

あなたは自社のホームページを大幅に変更することを相談しています。

なぜ変更するのか。変更によってより良くなることは、など要点を踏まえて提案しましょう。

Hello. Did you want to talk to me about your company's homepage?

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Hello. Did you want to talk to me about your company's homepage?

Unfortunately, not good. It's not easy to read.

自然な表現

Yes. Unfortunately, it's not good. It's not easy to read.

1. You need to deal with the YES/NO question in #1 first.
2. You need to explain WHAT this refers to.

I'm sorry to hear that. Why is it hard to read? What would you like us to change from the homepage?

At first, it is difficult to understand what we want to say. I think former people didn't clarify it. So, I would like to clarify what we want to communicate with our customers.

自然な表現

At first, it is difficult to understand what we want to say. I think former people didn't clarify it, so I would like to clarify what we want to communicate to our customers.

1. SO is a conjunction and can be used to join two sentences together here.
2. We communicate TO someone when we refer to a general method. Compare: "I want to communicate our plans to the team," with, "I want to communicate with our team about the plans."

That's good to know. If the homepage is easy to read, then customers can relate well to it. Who can help us improve it?

I am contact person. I will work with you.

自然な表現

I am the contact person. I will work with you.

1. We use ‘the’ when there is only one of something or when we are referring to a particular thing. (E.g. “I looked at the Moon. I used the Internet. The report was difficult to read on the small screen.”)

Wonderful. It's good to talk to the right person about that program. When do you start working on it?

I would like to clarify the information and set up roadmap for the improvement.

自然な表現

I would like to clarify the information and set up a road map for the improvement.

1. You must use an article (or a word like ‘my’, ‘his’ etc) before a singular countable noun.
2. Two words.

Okay. That's alright. Now, tell me, what do we write on the homepage? What kind of information should we put there?

I would like to give a message for Customer First. I will put simple message.

自然な表現

I would like to give a message for customers first. I will put a simple message on the home page.

1, 3. No capital letter required. It is not a proper noun.
2. Plural for this general point.
4. See 1. in #8 above.
5. You need to explain WHERE this refers to.

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