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Let's talk about how to spend your vacation.
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Do you have any plans for the vacation?
 
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Do you have any plans for the vacation?

Yes, I have an exciting plan to go to Hawaii this winter. I am excited for two mail reasons.
First, It's been 5 years since I last visited Hawaii due to the pandemic and high inflation in the states. Fortunately, we could purchase a great deal package which includes tickets and accommodations.

Second, my best friend from college lives there and I can hang out with her and her family most of the time. Her two children will go to college in mainland US next year, so it would be the last chance for us to spend time together.

自然な表現

Yes, I have an exciting plan to go to Hawaii this winter. I am excited for two main reasons.
First, it's been 5 years since I last visited Hawaii due to the pandemic and high inflation in the states. Fortunately, we could purchase a great deal package which includes tickets and accommodations.

Second, my best friend from college lives there and I can hang out with her and her family most of the time. Her two children will go to college in mainland US next year, so it would be the last chance for us to spend time together.

1. Correction of a spelling error.
2. Do not capitalize "it" when it is not the first word of a sentence.
That sounds like an amazing trip! It's great that you found a good deal, especially after such a long time. How do you plan to spend your time with your friend and her family in Hawaii? Any specific activities you're looking forward to?

Mostly, we will spend time outdoor, doing BBQ, sunbathing, and relaxing.
There is one activity that we all had agreed to do, which is surfing. None of us tried it and we will join a 3 day surf camp. While kids are very exciting about it, we, adults are pretty scared of it. I am sure that surfing is a challenging sport, especially for an adults. I wish I could say no, but I couldn't.
I hope I will meet a great teacher who helps me to conquer my fear of water, and I will enjoy the ride. Let's see.

自然な表現

Mostly, we will spend time outdoors, doing BBQ, sunbathing, and relaxing.
There is one activity that we all had agreed to do, which is surfing. None of us has tried it and we will join a 3-day surf camp. While the kids are very excited about it, we, the adults are pretty scared of it. I am sure that surfing is a challenging sport, especially for    adults. I wish I could say no, but I couldn't.
I hope I will meet a great teacher who will help me to conquer my fear of water, and I will enjoy the ride. Let's see.

1. Correction of a spelling error.
2. Use the determiner "the" to refer to something in particular.
3. The correct adjective to use here is "excited" which is defined as - feeling very happy and enthusiastic.
4. Do not use "an" before plural nouns.
5. Use the modal verb "will" to refer to something that is yet to happen.
It would be scary but I am sure it will be worth the experience. Would you be going to Hawaii all alone?

I am going to Hawaii with my husband. To be honest, I want to bring my daughter as well, but she has schedule conflicts and can't join this time.
Instead, my friend's parents, who live in Japan, will be there when we fly, so it will be a big family trip!
I love spending time with family and friends during holiday.

自然な表現

I am going to Hawaii with my husband. To be honest, I want to bring my daughter as well, but she has schedule conflicts and can't join us this time.
Instead, my friend's parents, who live in Japan, will be there when we fly, so it will be a big family trip!
I love spending time with family and friends during holidays.

1. Here is an alternative expression. "visiting".
2. The pronoun "us" is used as the object of a verb or a preposition to refer to a group that includes the speaker and at least one other person.
3. Use the plural noun "holidays" to refer to holidays in general.
  • plan(計画)
  • sightseeing(観光)
  • relaxation(リラックス)
  • booking(予約する)
  • 2 days and 3 nights(2泊3日)
  • I will be traveling to Kyoto for two days and three nights.(2泊3日で京都に行く予定です。)
  • I am planning a trip abroad.(海外旅行を計画しています。)
  • Are you planning to go somewhere?(どこかへ行く予定はありますか?)
  • I plan to go to the outlet mall and do some shopping.(アウトレットに行って買い物をする予定です。)
  • I plan to go to a hot spring to relax.(温泉に行ってリラックスする予定です。)

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