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ショッピングイベントで最近購入したものについて話してみよう

Let's talk about your recent purchases at a shopping event.
あなたはショッピングイベントで最近購入したものについて話しています。
「ブラックフライデー」や「サイバーマンデー」などのショッピングイベントで、最近購入したものについて話してみましょう。
What did you buy?
 
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What did you buy?

I bought a smartwatch for checking my health and recoding my activities on the Amazon sale. I could get it reasonably this time.

自然な表現

I bought a smartwatch to check my health and record my activities during an Amazon sale. I could get it at a reasonable price this time.

1. & 2. The preposition "to" is used with an infinitive to express use or purpose.
3. The preposition "during" is used to refer from the beginning to the end of a particular period.
4. Use the indefinite article "an" when it precedes a non-specific noun or an adjective that starts with a vowel.
5. This is a better phrase to use in this context.
That’s great! Smartwatches can be really helpful for tracking health and staying motivated with your activities. It's even better when you find a good deal during sales. What features of the smartwatch are you most excited to use for tracking your health?

My sleeping quality is bad for past several years. Therefore, the sleep quality tracking feature is the most useful for me. I also use the running recording feature because one of my favorite activities is running.

自然な表現

My sleeping quality has been bad for the past several years. Therefore, the sleep quality tracking feature is the most useful for me. I also use the running recording feature because one of my favorite activities is running.

1. Use the Present Perfect Tense to express situations that started in the past and are still true.
2. Use the definite article when referring to something specific or unique.
It sounds like the smartwatch will be really helpful for both your sleep and running. Do you think tracking your sleep will motivate you to improve your habits?

Yes, it is very helpful and useful for me. I started to try something how to improve my sleeping quality. For example, I realized stretching before sleep rises my sleeping quality. It's good to stretch before going to bed.

自然な表現

Yes, it is very helpful and useful for me. I started to try some things to improve my sleep quality. For example, I realized stretching before sleep improves my sleeping quality. It's good to stretch before going to bed.

1. This is a better phrase to use in this context. In addition, no need for the following adverb anymore, it's redundant.
2. The noun "sleep" functions as an adjective here.
3. The verb "to improve" means "to make or become better".
That's good. It's interesting that you mentioned your sleep problem because I have the same. I recently tried having a spoonful of organic honey before bed because it's said to improve melatonin levels in the body. Have you heard of it? Do you want to try it?

I have never heard about it. How does work melatonin for good sleep? Anyway, I'll try to have a spoonful of organic honey before sleeping. Is is okay to have it before just going to bed?

自然な表現

I have never heard about that. How does melatonin work for good sleep? Anyway, I'll try to have a spoonful of organic honey before sleeping. Is it okay to have it just before going to bed?

1. Use the pronoun "that" when referring to a specific thing previously mentioned, known, or understood.
2. The correct order of the words.
3. Correct spelling.
4. Same as correction No. 2.
Yes. I really take it before going to bed. It is effective for me. Have you consulted a doctor about your sleep problems before?

No, I haven't. My sleeping problem isn't serious so far. However, if it continue for a long time, I'll go to a clinic. Thank you for your concern.

自然な表現

No, I haven't. My sleeping problem isn't serious so far. However, if it continues for a long time, I'll go to a clinic. Thank you for your concern.

1. This is an alternative expression you can use: "severe".
2. The verb needs to be equated with the pronoun in the 3rd person singular form.

関連単語

  • discounts（割引）
  • bargains（特価品）
  • online store（オンラインストア）
  • wishlist（欲しいものリスト）
  • doorbusters（先着特価品）

関連フレーズ

  • I was amazed at the steep discounts during Black Friday.（ブラックフライデーの大幅値引きには驚きました。）
  • Every year, I look forward to finding the best bargains on Cyber Monday."（毎年、サイバーマンデーに最高の掘り出し物を見つけるのを楽しみにしています。）
  • I've added several items to my wishlist, hoping to get them during the next sale.（次のセールで手に入れたいと思い、いくつかの商品を欲しいものリストに追加しました。）
  • I woke up early to catch the doorbusters at my favorite store.（お気に入りの店の先着特価品を買うために早起きしました。）
  • I bought ABC at online store, so I managed to avoid the crowds during the sale.（ABCはオンラインストアで購入したので、セール中の混雑を避けることができました。）

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