勤労感謝の日がどんな日か説明してみよう

Explain what Labor Thanksgiving Day is about.
あなたは勤労感謝の日について説明しています。
日本の勤労感謝の日について、どんな日なのか、海外にも似たような祝日はあるのかなど話してあってみましょう。
What is Labor Thanksgiving Day?
 
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What is Labor Thanksgiving Day?

Labor Thanksgiving Days is a Japanese national holiday. This day is holiday, so most people take a rest and appreciate the harvest of the year. Labor Thanksgiving Day celebrates the dedication of workers nationwide.

自然な表現

Labor Thanksgiving Day is a Japanese national holiday. This day is a holiday, so most people take a day off and appreciate the harvest of the year. Labor Thanksgiving Day celebrates the dedication of workers nationwide.

1. It should be singular, it is one day.
2. Article is needed with 'holiday'
3. Better to use 'day off' to express they don't go to work that day.
Labor Thanksgiving Day sounds like a meaningful holiday that honors hard work and the year's harvest. How do you usually celebrate this day with your family or friends?

Holidays are usually spent with family. On national holidays, schools and companies are usually closed. I often go somewhere to enjoy. I like traveling, so national holidays are precious for me.

自然な表現

Holidays are usually spent with family. On national holidays, schools and companies are usually closed. I often go somewhere to enjoy myself. I like traveling, so national holidays are precious to me.

1. Another expression: People in Japan usually spend holidays with their families.
2. Object is needed here, enjoy yourself or enjoy something, like enjoy the holiday.
3. 'to' is more commonly used after precious, important, etc
That sounds wonderful! Do you have a particular memory of a Labor Thanksgiving Day celebration that stands out to you?

I have been to hot springs in other prefecture. However, the day is getting change and just a holiday these days. For office workers, Labor Thanksgiving day is a day off without using paid vacation. What is the typical work schedule of workers in your country?

自然な表現

I have been to hot springs in another prefecture. However, the meaning of the holiday is changing and it is just another holiday these days. For office workers, Labor Thanksgiving Day is a day off without using paid vacation. What is the typical work schedule for workers in your country?

1. Should use 'another' for an unspecified prefecture.
2. your expression was rephrased to sound more natural and for better clarity, the reason people celebrate it is changing and it is just one of the many holidays where people take a day off without doing anything special, your expression is too vague.
3. Should be capitalized
4. Should use 'for' to express who the schedule is for
In my country, office employees go to work from Mondays to Fridays. Also, they could only take time off when there's a holiday. When is the Labor Thanksgiving day usually held?

It is almost the same with Japan. The Labor Thanksgiving day is the 23th November. This day is national holiday before WW2, but the meaning had changed dramatically.

自然な表現

It is almost the same as Japan. The Labor Thanksgiving Day is the November 23rd. This day is has been a national holiday since before WW2, but the meaning has changed dramatically.

1. Should use 'as' after 'same'
2.It should be capitalized
3. Month should go first, '23rd' is used for '23', '24th, 25th' for 24, 25...
4. your expression was rephrased to sound more natural, you should use present perfect for something that started in the past and is still continuing
5. should use present perfect for past action that is related to the present
I see. Why do you say the meaning has changed dramatically? For us here, the Labor day holiday is celebrated every 1st of May.

Before WW2, the name was different and that day was on of the royal memorial day. The most important day of the year was called niiname-sai in Japanese. I don't know it will so I will try to research.

自然な表現

Before WW2, the name was different and that day was one of the royal memorial days. The most important day of the year was called niiname-sai in Japanese. I don't know much about itso I will try to research.

1. Correct spelling
2. Noun should be plural after 'one of'
3. this was added for better expression.
4. 'will' is not needed here
  • labor (労働)
  • gratitude(感謝)
  • holiday(休日)
  • workers(労働者)
  • celebration(お祝い)
  • In Japan, Labor Thanksgiving Day celebrates the dedication of workers nationwide.(日本では、勤労感謝の日は全国の労働者の献身を祝う日です。)
  • It's essential to show gratitude and appreciation.(感謝とねぎらいの気持ちを示すことが不可欠です。)
  • On national holidays, schools and companies are usually closed.(祝日は、学校や会社が休みになるのが一般的です。)
  • What is the typical work schedule of workers in your country?(あなたの国の一般的な勤務スケジュールを教えてください。)
  • Holidays are usually spent with family.(祝日は家族で過ごすことが多いです。)

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