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Here in Slovenia, winter dishes are getting popular again. There are many chestnut stands all around Ljubljana, and they're very delicious. But for actual meals, I really like something called 'jota'. It's a national dish. It has sausages, beans, and some other vegetables. I really like it. There are also many others, including deserts like 'struklji' (first letter is a letter pronounced as "sh", but the systems don't allow that kind of character.
Here in Slovenia, winter dishes are getting popular again. There are many chestnut stands all around Ljubljana, and the chestnuts are very delicious. For main meals, I really like something called 'jota'. It's a national dish. It contains sausages, beans, and some other vegetables. I really like it. There are also many other dishes, including desserts like 'struklji' (the first letter is pronounced as "sh", but the system doesn't allow that kind of character).
On cold mornings I sometimes even have jota, though I also eat a soup or some rice, but I wouldnt have a warm drink like tea. I'd rather just have cold water. We don't stock up for winter. Our apartment isn't that big and it is just kind of unnecesary. Here stores are usually open and even if they are closed (for example, because of snow), we usually have enough food for at least a week.
On cold mornings, I sometimes even have jota, though I also eat soup or some rice, but I wouldn't have a warm drink like tea. I'd rather just have cold water. We don't stock up for winter because our apartment isn't that big, and it is just kind of unnecessary. Here, stores are usually open, and even if they are closed (for example, because of snow), we usually have enough food for at least a week.
2. "Soup" is generally uncountable unless referring to a specific kind.
3. Added the missing apostrophe in the contraction.
4. Combined the two sentences with the subordinating conjunction "because" for a more cohesive sentence.
5.8. We use a comma before "and" when it is connecting two independent clauses.
6. Spelling correction.
My favourite season is, in fact, winter. I really like the vibe of it. I'll live with my family for at least 2 more years, until I finish elementary school. Elementary school here is 9 years long. I really like eggs on the weekend. I especially like scrambled ones. I can also make them myself! I also like eating meat, which I can also cook myself.
My favourite season is, in fact, winter. I really like its vibe. I'll live with my family for at least two more years, until I finish elementary school. Elementary school here lasts for nine years. I really like eating eggs on the weekends. I especially like scrambled ones. I can also make them myself! I also like eating meat, which I can also cook myself.
When I have the chance, I really like making burgers. In fact, it is my favourite one to make. Aside from cooking, I also like putting them together. Burgers are also delicious. They're a mix of a lot of tastes, into a balance. I usually only eat burgers I make and not from restaurants or similar places.
When I have the chance, I really like making burgers. In fact, they are my favourite dish to make. Aside from cooking, I also like putting them together. Burgers are also delicious. They're a mix of a lot of tastes in a balanced way. I usually only eat burgers I make and not those from restaurants or similar places.
Indeed, it is. I make it optional for one to choose if they want sauce on their burger. I prefer them without any extra toppings or sauces though. I usually cook what we have at home, but I never cooked vegetarian meat before, since no one in my family is vegetarian. Maybe someday, but I think I still wouldn't eat it. Last time I ate vegetarian meat I didn't like it much.
Indeed, it is. I make it optional for one to choose whether they want sauce on their burger. I prefer mine without any extra toppings or sauces, though. I usually cook with whatever we have at home, but I have never cooked vegetarian meat before, since no one in my family is vegetarian. Maybe someday, but I think I still wouldn't eat it. The last time I ate vegetarian meat, I didn't like it much.
2. Changed to "mine" to refer clearly to your own burger.
3. Added a comma to set off this conjunctive adverb from the rest of the sentence.
4. Added the preposition "with" to clarify the relationship between cooking and the ingredients available at home.
5. Changed to "whatever" for emphasis.
6. The present perfect tense "have never cooked" is more appropriate for life experiences up to now.
7. We use the definite article "the" when referring to a specific instance in the past.
関連単語
- season（旬）
- seasonally（季節ごと）
- most delicious（最も美味しい）
- nutritious（栄養のある）
- limited（限定）
関連フレーズ
- ~ is in season right now.（今が旬の食べ物は〜です。）
- Do you have a favorite seasonal food?（好きな季節の食べ物はありますか？）
- ~ is only available in limited areas in Japan.（~ は日本では限られた地域でしか入手できません。）
- Seasonal foods are rich in nutrients.（旬の食べ物は栄養が豊富です。）
- Seasonal foods are really delicious and are cheaper.（季節の食べ物はとても美味しく、手頃な価格で買うことができます。）
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2. "But" is unnecessary here because it doesn’t contrast with the previous sentence.
3. "Main" is more natural in this context.
4. "Contains" is more formal and natural when describing the ingredients of a dish.
5. Added "dishes" to improve clarity.
6. "Dessert" is the correct spelling for the sweet course eaten at the end of a meal.
7. The definite article "the" is required before ordinal numbers such as "first.
8. Removed "a letter" for a more natural and concise phrasing.
9. Changed to the singular "system" since you’re referring to the writing system in general.
10. Changed the verb form for correct subject-verb agreement.
11. Added the closing parenthesis for proper formatting.