患者の家族に治療について説明しよう

Explaining the treatment to the patient's family.
あなたは担当してる患者さんの家族に、治療方針についての説明をしています。
患者さん本人だけではなく、時に家族へ治療方針を説明することもあると思います。どのような治療が必要で、入院日数の目処など伝えられるようにしましょう。
I would like to know about the treatment plan.
 
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I would like to know about the treatment plan.

Your grandfather's kidneys are not working due to kidney failure, so he will undergo dialysis to clean the blood. Excess fluid from the blood and waste products are removed through dialysis. Until his kidney recovers, dialysis is supposed to continue. His kidney disease is a temporary problem. There are two types of dialysis: hemodialysis and peritoneal dialysis. Hemodialysis cleans the blood using an external machine as the filter, whereas peritoneal dialysis uses the inside lining of your abdomen. He is going to take the former four hours four times a week.

自然な表現

Your grandfather's kidneys are not working due to kidney failure, so he will undergo dialysis to clean the blood. Excess fluid from the blood and waste products are removed through dialysis. Until his kidneys recover, the dialysis treatment has to continue. His kidney disease is a temporary problem. There are two types of dialysis: hemodialysis and peritoneal dialysis. Hemodialysis cleans the blood using an external machine as the filter, whereas peritoneal dialysis uses the inside lining of your abdomen. He is going to take the former treatment for four hours four times a week.

1. 'Kidneys recover' is used as you mentioned that both his kidneys were not well.
2. This best explains what must continue.
3. This is added for detail.
4. This shows the duration.
I understand the situation. Dialysis is a crucial step for my grandfather's kidney condition. Are there any specific aspects or concerns, we would like more information about it?

Hemodialysis might cause some adverse reactions such as itchy skin, muscle cramps, low blood pressure, or sepsis. Also, both of dialysis causes fatigue. However, dialysis enhances the quality of life for many people, and they can carry on with their normal lives. Make sure he prevents himself from suffering from other health problems. We recommend he wear a mask when he goes out.

自然な表現

Hemodialysis might cause some adverse reactions such as itchy skin, muscle cramps, low blood pressure, or sepsis. Also, both types of dialysis cause fatigue. However, dialysis enhances the quality of life for many people, and they can carry on with their normal lives. Make sure he prevents himself from suffering from other health problems. We recommend he wear a mask when he goes out.

1. 'Types' shows what you are talking about.
2. As 'types' is used 'cause' is used.
3. 'Additionally, he must take great care to avoid catching any other illnesses.' can be used alternatively.
I appreciate the information about the dialysis treatment plan. It seems like there might be some side effects, but the overall goal is to improve the quality of life. Do you have any specific measures in place to address the potential adverse reactions?

Regular aerobic exercise may also help. It is not necessary to do excessive ones, but low-to-moderate ones. What's important is not to injury. Our support center will provide what kind of exercise suits him. To avoid low blood pressure, take water intake recommendations. Nevertheless, if he experiences low blood pressure, we can adjust the fluid used for dialysis. Also, moisturizing his skin helps cure itchy skin.

自然な表現

Regular aerobic exercise may also help. It is not necessary to do excessive ones, but low-to-moderate ones. He mustn't get injured. Our support center will provide the kind of exercise that suits him. To avoid low blood pressure, we will provide water intake recommendations. Nevertheless, if he experiences low blood pressure, we can adjust the fluid used for dialysis. Also, moisturizing his skin will help to cure itchy skin.

1. You can join the two sentences like this, 'Regular low to moderate aerobic exercise may also help.'
2. This best describes what shouldn't happen.
3. Definite article 'the' shows what exercise it is.
4. 'That' shows what the exercise will be like.
5. This shows what you shall do.
6. This best explains what it will do.
  • treatment plan(治療方針)
  • surgery(手術をする)
  • medicine(薬)
  • side effect(副作用)
  • be hospitalized(入院する)
  • detailed examination(精密検査)
  • We have a treatment plan for your mother. Shall we discuss it?(お母様の治療計画があります。相談しましょう。)
  • Your father needs surgery for a full recovery.(お父様の完治には手術が必要です。)
  • We've prescribed a new medicine for your son's condition.(お子さんの症状に合わせて新しい薬を処方しました。)
  • This medicine is effective, but there are potential side effects.(この薬は効果的ですが、副作用が出る可能性があります。)
  • Considering his condition, your father will need to stay a few nights for observation.(お父様の状態を考えると、数日間の入院が必要でしょう。)
  • We recommend a detailed examination for your mother to understand her condition better.(お母様の状態をより正確に把握するために、詳しい検査をお勧めします。)

こんな方にオススメ

  • ビジネス
  • 中級
  • 病院/医療業界
  • 病院