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I'd like to speak English more fluently. Because I like traveling,so I need to do.
I'd like to speak English more fluently because I like traveling.
When I was younger I used to learn English songs by heart. Andy Willams,Pat Boone,Carpenters...Are you familiar with them ? Maybe you are young, you don't know them I guess. The funny thing is, I can still sing them. I don't sing it often though.
I've been wanting to learn it lately,but I haven't been doing it. But there's a song I like. It's Minneapolis by Springsteen. Do you know that ? I want to learn it by heart. The rhythm is old-fashioned,too. That's good. Wouldn't it be cool if an old woman sang it with the correct pronunciation ?
When I was younger, I used to learn English songs by heart. Are you familiar with Andy Williams, Pat Boone, and the Carpenters? Maybe you are young, so I guess you don't know them. The funny thing is, I can still sing their songs. I don't sing them often though.
I've been wanting to learn one lately, but I haven't been doing it. I do like a song called "Minneapolis" by Springsteen. Do you know it? I want to learn it by heart. The rhythm is old-fashioned, too. That's good. Wouldn't it be cool if an old woman sang it with the correct pronunciation?
2. It's better to combine these two sentences. Also, it's "the Carpenters" with "the".
3. Use conjunctions to connect phrases/clauses. "So" is a good choice here.
4. "Them" was used to refer to the artists, but in this sentence it should be the songs.
5. This should refer to "songs" which is plural, so "them" is the right choice.
6. It is not clear what "it" is referring to.
7, 11. Use a space after commas and periods.
8. It's better to combine these sentences.
9. Use quotes for song titles, movie titles, etc.
10. "It" is the right choice to refer to the song you just mentioned.
12. Use a space after a question mark, but not before.
Actually, I try to sing it every day. I know the lyrics and am trying to remember the sounds.English is different because there are many unpronounced sounds. I like movies too. We have cable TV so we can watch a lot of programs.
But I don't understand, so I rely on the subtitle and just enjoy the movie. As for hearing practice, I can find on YouTube. I take an English class once a week. It's for hearing and speaking. The teacher speaks English clearly but a little faster for me. I'm pleased the teacher and classmates. I'm happy now.
Actually, I try to sing it every day. I know the lyrics and am trying to remember the sounds. English is different because there are many unpronounced letters. I like movies too. We have cable TV so we can watch a lot of programs, but I don't understand, so I rely on subtitles and just enjoy watching. As for listening practice, I can find resources on YouTube. I take an English class once a week. It's for listening and speaking. The teacher speaks English clearly but a little too fast for me. I'm pleased with my teacher and classmates. I'm happy now.
2. You mean "letters". All "sounds" are pronounced, but some "letters" in a word are not.
3. Avoid starting sentences with conjunctions, especially in formal and academic settings.
4. Don't use "the" when generalizing.
5. Use the plural form when generalizing or when there's more than one.
6. You can say "movies" to refer to any movie and not a particular one, but you can also say "watching" which would include TV programs, news, music videos, etc. (the ones that are not movies).
7, 9. "Listening" and "hearing" are different. "Listening" is the right choice here.
8. "Find" needs an object.
10. "Faster" is misused here.
11. "Pleased" is often followed by "with".
12. "My" is the right choice because you're specifically referring to your teacher and classmates.
My favorite is a British drama series called Downton Abbey. Are you familiar with it ? It was watched all over the world. Downton Abbey is a name of Manor House. It's the story of the nobles and servants who live in there. Each life is carefully depicted. Each characters is fascinating. This drama started more than 10 years ago.
Why do you think it's funny to talk about nobility ?said my son to me. He was totally into it too. I olso love French mysteries. I watch them every nights. I like the fast tempo.
My favorite is a British drama series called "Downton Abbey." Are you familiar with it? It was popular all over the world. Downton Abbey is the name of a manor house. It's the story of the nobles and servants who live there. Each character is carefully depicted and is fascinating. This drama started more than 10 years ago.
My son asked me why it's funny to talk about nobility. He was totally into it too. I also love French mysteries. I watch them every night. I like the fast tempo.
2. Don't use a space after question marks.
3. It is correct that it was "watched" all over the world, but that was because it was "popular".
4. Use "the" if referring to something specific or something that was mentioned previously.
5. Most common nouns need articles/determiners.
6. This is not a proper noun so there's no need to capitalize it.
7. There's no need for a preposition here.
8. "Character" is the right word choice.
9. This can be combined with the previous sentence using a conjunction.
10. This needs rephrasing to correct the construction.
11. Spelling mistake.
12. "Every" is used with singular nouns.
Yes,if I could watch the movie with English subtitles for English dialogue, it's great. But I usually watch one with Japanese subtitles. I'm looking for the good video in YouTube. But it's hard to find it. I thought about signing up for this app, but I can't spent any more money.This is great that the human answer s, but it's so expensive. I'm sorry. The best way to improve my English is practicing every day, I know. So I'll do my very best. Thanks for good experience.
Yes, if I could watch a movie with English subtitles for English dialogue, that would be great, but I usually watch one with Japanese subtitles. I'm looking for good videos on YouTube, but it's hard to find one. I thought about signing up for this app, but I can't spend any more money. It is great that a human answers, but it's so expensive. I'm sorry. I know the best way to improve my English is to practice every day, so I'll do my very best. Thanks for this good experience.
2, 12. Use a/an for singular count nouns if not specific or if mentioned for the first time.
3. This needs rephrasing to correct the construction.
4, 8, 16. Avoid starting sentences with conjunctions.
5. You are referring to good videos in general, not a specific one, so "the" is misused.
6. Use the plural form when generalizing or when there's more than one.
7. "On" is the right preposition to use here.
9. "One" is the right pronoun to use here.
10. Use the base form of the verb after the modal verb "can't".
11. "It" is the right pronoun to use here.
13. Typographical error.
14. This phrase should be moved at the start of the sentence.
15. Use "to practice" to be consistent with "to improve".
17. "This" is added to correct the construction.
関連単語
- aim(〜することを目指す)
- target(〔努力などの〕目的、目標)
- purpose(〔望む〕目的、目標、狙い)
- improve(〔能力などが〕伸びる、上達する)
- enhance(〔質・能力などを〕高める、さらによくする)
- global(グローバルな、地球規模の、全世界の)
- abroad(外国へ[で]、海外に[で])
- official language(公用語)
- second language(第二言語)
- determined((形)《be ~》決心[覚悟]している)
関連フレーズ
- I want to achieve fluency in English so that I can travel and work abroad.(海外旅行や海外で働くために、英語を流暢に話せるようになりたいです。)
- I'm studying English at an online English school because I can study at my own pace.(オンライン英会話スクールで英語を学んでいるのは、自分のペースで勉強できるからです。)
- I have studied English for a long time, but I am still not confident when speaking.(長い間英語を勉強してきましたが、話すことにはまだ自信がありません。)
- I am looking for ways to improve my conversational English skills.(英会話を上達させる方法を探しています。)
- I am able to understand English text, but I struggle with writing.(英語の文章を理解することはできるが、書くことに苦労している。)
- I am eager to connect with people from all over the world.(世界中の人たちとつながりたいと思っています。)
- I would like to have conversations with people from different cultures.(異なる文化の人々と話してみたいと思っています。)
- I am having trouble with the sudden change to English as the official language of the company.(突然社内公用語が英語になって困っています。)
- I want to improve my pronunciation.(発音を改善したいと思っています。)
- I have always dreamed of working abroad.(海外で働くことがずっと夢なんです。)
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