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I prepared the proposal for EEE company. Could you please check and give me some advice?
Background&Role
EEE, a leading global provider of data center campuses, is currently discussing to reach an agreement to form a JV to develop a data center in Higashikurume.
EEE has developed data centers in major cities around the world and is currently constructing its first data center campus in Osaka, Japan, expected completion scheduled for May 2024.
To be continued.
I prepared the proposal for EEE company. Could you please check and give me some advice?
Background&Role
EEE, a leading global provider of data center campuses, is currently discussing reaching an agreement to form a JV to develop a data center in Higashikurume.
EEE has developed data centers in major cities around the world and is currently constructing its first data center campus in Osaka, Japan, with expected completion scheduled for May 2024.
To be continued.
EEE, together with its JV partner, intends to ensure that the data center development in Higashikurume will evolve the data center design in a novel way, improving its economics, flexibility, reliability, efficiency, and sustainability to enable rapid expansion in response to market demands.
SFC will be able to contribute EEE by providing effective solutions through various management services in the data center construction project to achieve the above objectives of the EEE JV.
To be continued.
EEE, together with its JV partner, intends to ensure that the data center development in Higashikurume will evolve the data center design in a novel way, improving its economics, flexibility, reliability, efficiency, and sustainability to enable rapid expansion in response to market demands.
SFC will be able to contribute to EEE by providing effective solutions through various management services in the data center construction project to achieve the above objectives of the EEE JV.
To be continued.
In particular, we focus on the cost management services and optional project management services that may be effective in this context.
関連単語
- correct（正確な）
- examine（観察する、調べる）
- sift（調査する、検査する）
- analyze（分析する）
- probe（（名）調査、（動）探る、調べる）
- inspection（視察）
- study（調査、研究）
- peruse（詳細に調べる）
- scrutinize（精査する）
- scan（（名）スキャン、見渡すこと、（動）～を精査する）
関連フレーズ
- Did you find any errors in the document after inspecting it?（この書類をよく読んで、何か間違いはありましたか？）
- Will you scrutinize every word, or just scan the document?（一言一句注意深く見ましたか、それともざっと見た感じですか？）
- I need to look over the document for any errors before submitting it.（その書類を提出する前に、いくつか誤りを修正しなければなりません。）
- Do you have any comments after checking out the document?（資料をご覧になって、何かご意見はありませんか？）
- Can you review this document and make any revisions?（この書類をよく見て改正していただけますか？）
- Can you please review this draft before I formally submit it?（このドラフトを正式に提出する前に、確認していただけますか？）
- Can you peruse this document?（この書類を細かく見ていただけますか？）
- I would appreciate it if you could examine this document.（この資料を見ていただければ幸いです。）
- Do you need to look through this document before I send it?（この書類を送る前に目を通しますか？）
- I heard that you need to carefully look over the entire document today.（今日はその書類にじっくり取り込むそうですね。）
こんな方にオススメ
2. The preposition was missing in this sentence, so we needed to add "with."