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誕生日をどのように過ごしたかについて話してみよう

Let's talk about how you spent your birthday.
あなたは誕生日をどのように過ごしたかについて聞かれています。当日の様子や嬉しかったことなどを伝えてみましょう。
誕生日当日はどのように過ごしましたか？嬉しかったことや楽しかったことなど、当日の様子を具体的に伝えてみましょう。また、海外では一般的にどのように過ごすのか講師に尋ねてみると、新しい発見があるかもしれません。
How did you spend your birthday?
 
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How did you spend your birthday?

I was able to celebrate my birthday at a super luxury hotel in Dubai. The manager of a wonderful hotel in Dubai, which is used by the Arab royal family, celebrated his birthday. It was given to me. It was a truly wonderful hotel stay. On the morning of my birthday, I was woken up by a wake-up call wishing me a happy birthday, and I had the best breakfast ever. Then I went sightseeing in Dubai and was able to buy gold, platinum and diamond products. On my last birthday, I spent $250,000.

自然な表現

I was able to celebrate my birthday at a super luxury hotel in Dubai. The room which is used by the Arab royal family was given to me. It was a truly wonderful hotel stay. On the morning of my birthday, I was woken up by a wake-up call wishing me a happy birthday, and I had the best breakfast ever. Then I went sightseeing in Dubai and was able to buy gold, platinum, and diamond products. On my last birthday, I spent $250,000.

1. I think this is what you meant to say.
With such a memorable celebration, could you share some specific highlights or standout moments from your stay at the hotel?

On the night of my birthday, the taxi driver, hotel guide, and others came to another luxury hotel and we held another high-end dinner birthday party. People around me celebrated my birthday, and before I knew it, hundreds of multiracial people were celebrating my birthday. I was able to spend a wonderful birthday party while eating French cuisine full of foie gras, caviar, and gold leaf.

自然な表現

On the night of my birthday, the taxi driver, hotel guide, and others took me to another luxury hotel, and we had another high-end dinner birthday party. People around me took part in celebrating my birthday, and before I knew it, hundreds of multiracial people joined in my birthday celebration. I was able to eat French cuisine such as foie gras, caviar, and gold leaf.

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3 and 4. This is better word phrasing
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Could you share more about the atmosphere and ambiance of the high-end dinner birthday party? How did the presence of multiracial guests contribute to the overall experience?

Participants included presidents and executives of global oil companies and executives of global IT companies. Everyone was very impressed and enjoyed the dinner. Late at night on my birthday, I went to a fancy club in Dubai and danced. I may never celebrate another birthday as wonderful as this one.

自然な表現

Participants included presidents and executives of global oil companies and executives of global IT companies. Everyone was very impressed and enjoyed the dinner. Later, I went to a fancy club in Dubai and danced. I may never celebrate another birthday in such a way again.

1. This is less wordy and more straightforward.
2. This is better word phrasing

関連単語

  • birthday message（バースデイメッセージ）
  • birthday song（バースデイソング）
  • cook dinner（夕食を作る）
  • go shopping（買い物に行く）
  • クラッカーを鳴らす（pop (party) poppers）
  • buy a birthday cake（バースデイケーキを買う）
  • receive a letter（手紙をもらう）
  • receive a call（電話をもらう）
  • receive a gift/present（プレゼントを受け取る）
  • go on a trip（旅行に行く）

関連フレーズ

  • I went to the restaurant that I've always wanted to go to.（ずっと行きたかったレストランに行きました。）
  • I stayed at a luxury hotel.（高級ホテルに泊まりました。）
  • My friends sang me happy birthday.（友人が誕生日ソングを歌ってくれました。）
  • My wife bought me something I've always wanted.（欲しかったものを妻が買ってくれました。）
  • I ate without worrying about calories.（カロリーを気にせずに食べました。）
  • I went on a trip by myself.（一人旅をしました。）
  • I had to work that day.（当日は仕事でした。）
  • We/I celebrated (it) on a different day.（別日にお祝いしてもらいました。）
  • I got really excited.（すごくワクワクしました。）
  • It made my eyes fill up with tears.（涙が溢れました。）

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