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在宅勤務の良い点、悪い点を話してみよう

Let's talk about the advantages and disadvantages of working from home.
在宅勤務の良い点、悪い点を話し合っています。
在宅勤務の良い点、悪い点に関してあなたの意見を伝えてみましょう。
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What are the advantages and disadvantages of working from home?
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What are the advantages and disadvantages of working from home?

In my opinion, I think there are more advantages. One of the reasons is that we don't need to commute anymore. It contributes to conquer infections. Also, we ca use that time to spend calmly.

自然な表現

In my opinion, I think there are more advantages. One of the reasons is that we don't need to commute anymore. It also contributes to preventing infections. Also, we can spend more time calmly on our own.

1 - add 'also' since you're adding one more advantage
2 - contributes to + verb in 'ing' form
3 - you meant to say 'can'
4 - this is a clearer way to say what you wanted.
That's true. If we stay at home, it decreases the chance of getting infected. What do you mean by spending the time calmly?

I mean we don't feel stress. For example, we no longer to bother crowded places, interacting our colleagues, etc. Certainly, we are put in a difficult situation, but we'll be able to overcome it.

自然な表現

I mean we don't feel stress. For example, we no longer need to bother with crowded places, interacting with our colleagues, etc. Certainly, we are put in a difficult situation, but we'll be able to overcome it.

1 - it's clearer to say 'no longer need to bother with crowded places'
2 - interacting 'with' people.
I see. I understand what you mean now. Indeed, there are fewer distractions at home than at the office. What about the disadvantages of working from home?

A disadvantage to working from home is that it is difficult to create an environment where we can concentrate on our tasks especially we have little children. Some of my colleagues take care of children while working and it seems quite hard.

自然な表現

A disadvantage to working from home is that it is difficult to create an environment where we can concentrate on our tasks especially if we have little children. Some of my colleagues take care of children while working and it seems quite hard.

1 - add 'if' because the following sentence is hypothetical
I can totally relate to that as I am a working mom. It is indeed a but bothering to handle children's noises and tantrums while working. Do you have your own working space at home?

Unfortunately, no, I don't. As you know, Japan is a small country, so normally we live in a small house. Also, Japanese women are in a higher position compared to men in house. Therefore, women have their own private rooms, but men don't have them. Japanese father's rank is the lowest at home.

自然な表現

Unfortunately, no, I don't. As you know, Japan is a small country, so normally we live in a small house. Also, Japanese women are in a higher position compared to men in the house. Therefore, women have their own private rooms, but men don't have them. Japanese father's rank is the lowest at home.

1 - add 'the' because you're referring to a place that has already been mentioned.
I got it. Thank you for that information. I am unfamiliar with that system in a Japanese household. Can you share more about it? Why do the Japanese fathers have the lowest rank at home?

I don't know the specific reason. Many Japanese women say fathers are like ATM machines, it means they just earn money and pay. Some say fathers' position is lower than dog. Also, dog is followed by cat. It means, father is below cat. My wife always scolded me and kidnapped my son. She insits me pay huge money if I want to meet him. Even though I pay, she never allows to meet him. I'm a slave, so to speak.

自然な表現

I don't know the specific reason. Many Japanese women say fathers are like ATM machines, which means they just earn money and pay for things. Some say the father's position is lower than the dog's. Also, the dog is followed by the cat. It means, the father is below the cat. My wife always scolded me and kidnapped my son. She insists that I pay a lot of money if I want to meet him. Even though I pay, she never allows me to meet him. I'm a slave, so to speak.

1 - add the relative pronoun 'which' to refer to the previous sentence
2 - pay 'for something' - this is the correct expression
3, 5 - add 'the' because you're referring to a specific position
4 - this is the correct possessive form of a singular noun
6 - add a possessive 's' because you're referring to the position of the dog
7, 8, 10 - add 'the' because you're referring to a specific animal
9 - add 'the' because you're referring to a figure that has already been mentioned
11 - this is the correct spelling of the verb
12 - insists 'that' + sentence
13 - use 'a lot of' to quantify money
14 - you need an object after the verb 'allow'.
  • prefer(〜の方がいい)
  • communication (意思の疎通)
  • telephone conference(電話会議)
  • disadvantage(欠点)
  • advantage(利点)
  • face-to-face(対面で、面と向かって)
  • save time(時間を節約する)
  • commute time(通勤時間)
  • telework(在宅勤務)
  • work from home(在宅勤務)
  • It will probably be a problem in the future.(それは今後の課題になるでしょう。)
  • I personally believe the company should create a work from home workflow.(私の意見では、会社は在宅勤務のワークフローを作るべきだと思っています。)
  • I got used to communicating with colleagues online.(オンラインでの同僚とのコミュニケーションにも慣れてきました。)
  • We were put in a difficult situation.(私たちは困難な状況に置かれました。)
  • First, I would like to share my opinion.(まず最初に、私の意見を述べたいと思います。)
  • In my opinion, I think there are a lot of advantages / disadvantages to working from home.(私の意見ですが、在宅ワークには様々なメリット/デメリットがあると思います。)
  • The reason is that I've never been a facilitator in online meetings.(なぜなら、オンラインミーティングで進行役をしたことがないからです。)
  • A disadvantage to working from home is that it is difficult to create an environment where I can concentrate on my tasks.(在宅勤務のデメリットは、仕事に集中できる環境を作ることが難しいことです。)
  • An advantage to working from home is that, instead of commuting, I can use that time to study English.(在宅勤務のメリットは、通勤時間を有効に使って英会話のレッスンを受けられることです。)

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