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在宅勤務の良い点、悪い点を話してみよう

Let's talk about the advantages and disadvantages of working from home.
在宅勤務の良い点、悪い点を話し合っています。
在宅勤務の良い点、悪い点に関してあなたの意見を伝えてみましょう。
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What are the advantages and disadvantages of working from home?
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What are the advantages and disadvantages of working from home?

I'm thinking about the working from home. I assume most people who can work from home are working while doing personal activities at home. For example, my wife is working while doing the laundry at home. Sometimes, I'm working while watching TV at home. On the other hand, I guess we didn't do personal activities when we had to work at the office. How do you feel about that? Do you think this working style is the advantages or disadvantages of working from home?

自然な表現

I'm thinking about    working from home. I assume most people who can work from home are working while doing personal activities at home. For example, my wife is working while doing the laundry at home. Sometimes, I work while watching TV at home. On the other hand, I guess we didn't do personal activities when we had to work at the office. How do you feel about that? What do you think of this working style and the advantages or disadvantages of working from home?

1. The article "the" appears to be incorrectly used in this context. Consider removing it.
2. Consider using the simple present tense form when describing events that occur regularly, or that are currently happening.
3. Consider using this expression to clearly express your point and to improve the fluency of the sentence.
Well, I would have to say that one of the big advantages of working from home is there is no need to commute to work. What do you think?

I agree with you. On the other hand, I think one of the disadvantages of working from home is that we forget to take days off. As I mentioned earlier, those who can work from home is able to do personal activities during their work time. In other words, we can do personal activities without days off. As a result, we forget to take days off. What do you think about that?

自然な表現

I agree with you. On the other hand, I think one of the disadvantages of working from home is that we forget to take days off. As I mentioned earlier, those who can work from home are able to do personal activities during their work time. In other words, we can do personal activities without days off. As a result, we forget to take days off. What do you think about that?

1. The verb form "is" does not match the subject "those". Consider changing the verb form for subject-verb agreement.
Actually, if I had a day off while working remotely, I'd not do anything related to my job. How about you?

I see. In my case, if I had a day off while working remotely, I'd do something related to my job a little, such as checking my email. On the other hand, if needed, I'm doing personal activities even if I'm in my work time. How do you feel about my work style?

自然な表現

I see. In my case, if I had a day off while working remotely, I'd do something related to my job a little, such as checking my email. On the other hand, if needed, I'd do personal activities even if I'm in my work time. How do you feel about my work style?

1. Consider using the contraction "I'd" which is short for "I would" in this context. Use the modal verb "would" when indicating the consequence of an imagined event or situation.
2. When used with a modal verb such as "should", "will", "must", etc, a verb must be in its base form, for example. Consider using the base form of the verb in this context.
I would say that you are more highly motivated to work even on your days off than I am. Maybe it's because of the great Japanese work ethic. Would you agree?

I agree and disagree with you. Of course, we might have highly motivated to work, but we might not distinguish between personal time and working time.

In my case, I think I can work anytime, anywhere I want as long as I do productive work. Therefore, I sometimes work during a day off and I sometimes don't work during the work time. As such, I sometimes forget to take a day off. It might not be good for the work-life balance.

自然な表現

I agree and disagree with you. Of course, we might be highly motivated to work, but we might not distinguish between personal time and working time.

In my case, I think I can work anytime and anywhere I want as long as I do productive work. Therefore, I sometimes work during my days off and I sometimes don't work during the work time. As such, I sometimes forget to take a day off. It might not be good for the work-life balance.

1. Use the verb "be" when referring to having the state, quality, identity, nature, role, etc., specified.
2. Consider using the conjunction "and" to join two words, phrases, parts of sentences, or related statements together.
3. Use the pronoun "my" when referring to something belonging to or connected with you(the writer or speaker). "My" is the possessive form of "I", used before a noun.
4. Use plural form when referring to things in general.
  • work from home(在宅勤務)
  • telework(在宅勤務)
  • commute time(通勤時間)
  • save time(時間を節約する)
  • face-to-face(対面で、面と向かって)
  • advantage(利点)
  • disadvantage(欠点)
  • telephone conference(電話会議)
  • communication (意思の疎通)
  • prefer(〜の方がいい)
  • An advantage to working from home is that, instead of commuting, I can use that time to study English.(在宅勤務のメリットは、通勤時間を有効に使って英会話のレッスンを受けられることです。)
  • A disadvantage to working from home is that it is difficult to create an environment where I can concentrate on my tasks.(在宅勤務のデメリットは、仕事に集中できる環境を作ることが難しいことです。)
  • The reason is that I've never been a facilitator in online meetings.(なぜなら、オンラインミーティングで進行役をしたことがないからです。)
  • In my opinion, I think there are a lot of advantages / disadvantages to working from home.(私の意見ですが、在宅ワークには様々なメリット/デメリットがあると思います。)
  • First, I would like to share my opinion.(まず最初に、私の意見を述べたいと思います。)
  • We were put in a difficult situation.(私たちは困難な状況に置かれました。)
  • I got used to communicating with colleagues online.(オンラインでの同僚とのコミュニケーションにも慣れてきました。)
  • I personally believe the company should create a work from home workflow.(私の意見では、会社は在宅勤務のワークフローを作るべきだと思っています。)
  • It will probably be a problem in the future.(それは今後の課題になるでしょう。)

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