取り扱ってみたい新しい商材について話してみよう

Talking about a new product that you want to trade
あなたは部長に今後取り扱ってみたい新しい商材について話しています。
あなたは商社で働いています。今後どんな商材が売れるか、部長と相談してみましょう。
Tell me about the new product that you want to trade.
 
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Tell me about the new product that you want to trade.
#miss

A trend on the Internet, I think, is so-called "mobile fast". I also think that the trend will continue for 20 years, because the PC has declined and mobile phone has been increasing more and more. I find that mobile phones are lightweight to use, and it has many functions and APPs. On the contrary the PC is heavy and not convenient on outside.

#correct

A trend on the Internet, I think, is so-called "mobile fast". I also think that the trend will continue for 20 years, because the PC has declined and mobile phone use has been increasing more and more. I find that mobile phones are lightweight to use, and it have many functions and APPs. On the contrary the PC is heavy and not convenient on outside.

Could you further explain this concept "mobile fast"? I agree, computers, even laptops, are hard to use. Mobile phones are more practical and convenient.
#miss

They say that recently the first target OS to release a software has been changed from the Windows to a mobile OS. It is called "mobile first". There are many reasons. For example mobile can collect more data than PC. Moreover an installing cost can reduce drastically and mobile phones have many censors to use easily. I want to trade mobile APPs.

#correct

They say that recently the first target OS to release a software has been changed from the Windows to a mobile OS. It is called "mobile first". There are many reasons. For example mobiles can collect more data than PCs. Moreover, installation cost can reduce drastically and mobile phones have many censors to use easily. I want to trade mobile APPs.

Oh ok. So is this available to everybody? What will I need for it?
#miss

There are many mobile APPs in the world. Some APPs earn much money, others don't. It's very important for us to select good mobile APPs. I think APPs for consumers are in the red oceans, but APPs for business are in the blue oceans. To put it simply, we should not trade a APP which would be used by everybody. Please help us to search such APPs.

#correct

There are many mobile APPs in the world. Some APPs earn a lot of money, others don't. It's very important for us to select good mobile APPs. I think APPs for consumers are in the red oceans, but APPs for business are in the blue oceans. To put it simply, we should not trade a APP which would be used by everybody. Please help us to search such APPs.

OK. SO what do you feel would be the most successful app type?
#miss

Now, I consider two types of APPs. One is an authentication, the other is a protocol. Both are niches, but I think they are in blue oceans. That the reason why I select them in many APPs. The authentication is to certify person to system. The protocol is to protect information leak from attacks. The first doesn't have de facto standard.

#correct

Now, I consider two types of APPs. One is an authentication, the other is a protocol. Both are niches, but I think they are oceans apart. That is the reason why I select them in many APPs. The authentication is to certify person to system. The protocol is to protect information leak from attacks. The first doesn't have de facto standard.

Yeah, thanks for that information. I think if we keep doing our best it will be very successful for all types. Where did you learn all this information?
#miss

Thank you for your saying that. The second in mobiles makes us happy because many developers offer consumers only. Only one solution can provide a protocol solution to people who work enterprise. I have been learning this kind of information through the Internet. I have been learning this kind of information from specialists who can mentor.

#correct

Thank you for your saying that. The second in mobiles makes us happy because many developers offer consumers only. Only one solution can provide a protocol solution to people who work on enterprises. I have been learning this kind of information through the Internet. I have been learning this kind of information from specialists who can mentor me.

  • product(商材 )
  • handle(取り扱う )
  • customer(顧客 )
  • viewpoint(視点 )
  • manager(部長 )
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  • Let's use Euglena, which is recognized as a health food, as an ingredient for the next generation of energy product. (健康食品や次世代エネルギーの原料として注目されているミドリムシを取り扱いましょう。 )
  • I would like to enter the smartphone business. (スマートフォンのビジネスに参入したいです。 )
  • Let's acquire domestic companies overseas. (海外の現地企業を買収しましょう。 )
  • Let's start an e-commerce website. (ネット通販のプラットフォームを始めましょう。 )

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