日本のホワイトデーについて説明してみよう

Explaining Japan’s White Day
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ホワイトデーは日本の習慣なので、他国では知られていないかもしれません。外国人の友人にホワイトデーがどんな日か教えてあげましょう。
What's "White Day"?
 
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What's "White Day"?

White Day is at march 14th, and it is the day when a boy confesses to a girl. To be precise in Japan valentine days is the day that girls will give chocolate to boys to tell that they love them. So on white days if the boys also love that girl that gave him chocolate, boys will gave back the chocolate to that girl. I hope you understood.

自然な表現

White Day is on March 14, and it is the day when a boy confesses his feelings to a girl. To be precise, on Valentine's Day in Japan, girls will give chocolate to boys to tell them they love them. So on White Day if the boy also loves the girl that gave him chocolate, the boy will give back the chocolate to that girl. I hope you understand.

1. ''On'' is used for saying the day or date when something happens.
2. and 6. Days, months, and holidays are always capitalized as these are proper nouns.
3. When referring to a specific date in the month-day date format, use cardinal numbers (one, two, three) rather than ordinal numbers.
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8. The definite article is used before singular and plural nouns when the noun is specific or particular.
9. The singular form is needed, considering the meaning of the sentence.
10. The formula for the simple future is will + root form of the verb.
11. The present tense is needed, considering the rest of the sentence.
Oh really? I had no idea, there was such a day in the Japanese calendar. When a boy confesses his love to a girl does the boy gift the girl?

Yes. On valentine days girls will give boys chocolates so it is same. Boys will also give chocolates to girls.

自然な表現

Yes. On Valentine's Day, girls will give boys chocolates, so it is the same. Boys will also give chocolates to girls.

1. You misspelt this word.
2. A comma follows an introductory word, phrase, or clause set.
3. When coordinating conjunctions connect two independent clauses, the conjunction is always preceded by a comma.
4. The definite article is used before singular and plural nouns when the noun is specific or particular.
That way everyone is guaranteed to receive something. I am sure flower and chocolates companies make a lot of money during this time. What do you say?

Sorry. I could not understand the meaning of "What do you say?"

自然な表現

Sorry, I could not understand the meaning of "What do you say?"

1. This can all be one sentence.
Oh, I am sorry for confusing you. "What do you say" means "what do you think about the situation at hand".

I would think it's a good thing to the company that are selling chocolates or flowers.

自然な表現

  think it's a good thing for the companies that are selling chocolates or flowers.

1. This is unnecessary.
2. ''For'' is used for saying who or what is intended to receive something or get the benefit of it.
3. The plural form of the noun is needed, considering the meaning of the sentence.
I agree with you. What else is done on the 14th of March? Why is called "White Day"? Are people required to dress is white?

I think on white day only boys and mens will give back some chocolates. And the reason of the name "White day" is because white is a symbol of pure love.

自然な表現

I think on White Day, only boys and men will give back some chocolates, and the reason for the name "White day" is because white is a symbol of pure love.

1. and 2. Days, months, and holidays are always capitalized as these are proper nouns.
3. A comma symbolizes a slight pause that can separate ideas or grammatical structures in a sentence.
4. The plural of "man" is "men".
5. This can all be one sentence.
6. We use for to talk about a purpose or a reason for something.
  • March 14th(3月14日)
  • gift(贈り物、プレゼント)
  • St. Valentine's Day(バレンタインデー )
  • White Day(ホワイトデー )
  • return(お返し)
  • in return for (~のお返しに)
  • Japanese confectionery companies created White Day. (日本のお菓子業界がホワイトデーを作った。)
  • Men give gifts to women on March 14th. (3月14日に男性が女性にプレゼントを渡します。)
  • White Day is an event unique to Japan.(ホワイトデーは日本特有のイベントだ。)
  • Men usually give women marshmallows. (男の人は女性にマシュマロを贈ります。)

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