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The current exam system gives students opportunities to study a variety of subjects like Japanese, math, sciense, history and so on.
You know, Japan is one of the societies which sets a greater value on the academic carrer. And Japanese are tend to be too serious, like, "If I fail, my life will be over...!" However, people who play active parts in business are not always from famous colleges. The most important thing is their personalities, positiveness, and so on. So more colleges should adopt recommend systems for students, like who actively do volunteer works, get qualification and so on.
The current exam system gives students opportunities to study a variety of subjects like Japanese, math, science, history, and so on.
You know, Japan is one of the societies which sets a greater value on the academic career. Also, the Japanese tend to be too serious, like, "If I fail, my life will be over...!" However, people who play active parts in business are not always from famous colleges. The most important thing is their personalities, positiveness, and so on. So more colleges should adopt the recommended systems for students, like those who actively do volunteer work, get qualifications, and so on.
I think it's easy to understand because more harder you study, the more high-level colleges you can enter.
However, I wanted to enjoy high school life more. Our high school was so strict that we couldn't be active. Just from I entered a high school, our teacher said that we have to decide where you want to enter and study harder and harder.
I think it's easy to understand because the harder you study, the more high-level colleges you can enter.
However, I wanted to enjoy high school life more. Our high school was so strict that we couldn't be active. Just as I entered high school, our teacher said that we have to decide where we want to enter and study harder and harder.
I think that there are two big benefits.
First, there are a lot of teachers whose knowledges are so deep and wide that you can deepen what you want to study.
Second, the more harder you study, the more friends who live actively you can have.
However, it can't always ensure a successful carreer.
When it comes to job-hunting, popular companies tend to adopt people who take part in a various activities, like clubs, volunteer works, internships, and so on. So it can be said that what's important is what you do, not where you enter.
I think that there are two big benefits.
First, there are a lot of teachers whose knowledges are so deep and wide that you can deepen what you want to study.
Second, the harder you study, the more friends who live actively you can have.
However, it can't always ensure a successful career.
When it comes to job-hunting, popular companies tend to adopt people who take part in various activities, like clubs, volunteer work, internships, and so on. Thus, it can be said that what's important is what you do, not where you enter.
2. Misspelled word - career
3. Remove the article before a plural noun.
4. Use the singular form of the uncountable noun. Add a quantifier to make the noun plural (for example, a lot of work).
There are two types of entrance exams, except for recommended exams for candidates.
One is Common Test for University, nd the other is individual test.
If you want to enter a national universiity, you must take both exams. First you take the former test. However, if your score is low and doesn't meet the criteria, you'll lost the right to take the later exams. So the burdens to students who want to enter a national university are too heavy.
There are two types of entrance exams, except for recommended exams for candidates.
One is Common Test for University, and the other is an individual test.
If you want to enter a national university, you must take both exams. First, you take the former test. However, if your score is low and doesn't meet the criteria, you'll lose the right to take the later exams. So the burdens on students who want to enter a national university are too heavy.
If I was s student now, I would say it's definetely unneccesary.
However, the process of studing hard and overcoming any temptation like TV, games and so on is necessary and precious experience.
The former test takes two days, and the later one takes a day. Ordinally, those exams is held from January to March. So students often obstructed because of heavy snowing and trains being delayed.
If I were a student now, I would say it's __ unnecessary.
However, the process of studying hard and overcoming any temptation like TV, games, and so on is a necessary and precious experience.
The former test takes two days, and the latter one takes a day. Ordinally, those exams are held from January to March. So students are often obstructed because of heavy snowing and trains being delayed.
2. Remove the filler word "definitely" to make the idea concise.
3. Misspelled word - unnecessary
4. Misspelled word - studying
5. Use a comma to separate items in a series.
6. Use an indefinite article before a non-specific noun.
7. Misspelled word - latter
8. Subject-verb agreement
9. Add an auxiliary verb to the main verb.
関連単語
- admission based on recommendation（推薦入学 ）
- cram school（学習塾、予備校）
- college entrance exams（大学受験 ）
- academic career-based society（学歴社会）
- cram（詰め込み勉強をする）
関連フレーズ
- The students are cramming for their college entrance exams. （受験生は試験のために詰め込み勉強をします。）
- Almost all of the students attend cram schools.（ほとんどの受験生が予備校に通っています。）
- The system of college entrance exams in Japan differs from the one in America. （日本とアメリカの大学入試制度は異なっています。）
- In Japan, you are required to get high scores on exams. （日本では、テストで高得点を取ることが一番求められています。）
- Compared with Japan, American colleges set a higher value on your character. （日本と比べてアメリカの大学ではより個人の人となりが重視されています。）
こんな方にオススメ
2. Use a comma to separate items in a series.
3. Misspelled word - career
4. Replace the conjunction "and" with the adverb "also". The sentence is grammatically correct but in formal writing, using conjunctions at the beginning of a sentence is not encouraged.
5. 7. Use a definite article before a specific noun.
6. Remove the auxiliary verb before the main verb.
8. Use the adjective form of the word.
9. Add the pronoun "those" to act as the subject of the clause.
10. Use the singular form of the uncountable noun. Add a quantifier to make the noun plural (for example, a lot of work).
11. Use the plural form of the noun.