日本の大学受験に関して自分の考えを述べてみよう

Expressing your opinion about college entrance exams in Japan.
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日本の大学受験制度を外国人の友人に説明してみましょう。大学受験にはどんなメリット、デメリットがあるでしょうか。
What do you think about college entrance exams in Japan?
 
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What do you think about college entrance exams in Japan?

Japan's university admissions system is transparent and equitable. We have mainly general admission, admission office style admission, and recommendations by designated schools. The exams for subjects depend on the university and #Rmajor. In general, public universities generally require seven subjects from five subject areas, and private universities require three subjects. I'm satisfied with the system, but I'm sorry about the trend some universities are aiming at institutions like job training schools rather than placing liberal arts at the core of their education. Also, such a trend lowers the barrier to getting into prestigious, not elite, universities.

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Japan's university admissions system is transparent and equitable. We have mainly general admission, admission office style admission, and recommendations by designated schools. The exams for subjects depend on the university and major. In general, public universities generally require seven subjects from five subject areas, and private universities require three subjects. I'm satisfied with the system, but I'm concerned about the trend some universities are aiming at institutions like job training schools rather than placing liberal arts at the core of their education. Also, such a trend lowers the barrier to getting into prestigious, not elite, universities.

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It's interesting to hear your perspective on the college entrance exams in Japan. How do you think the shift towards job training schools as institutions may impact the overall quality of education and the diversity of students in prestigious universities?

Before answering your questions, let me explain the differences between prestigious and elite universities. Prestigious universities are usually all-through private schools from elementary or middle school to high school, or sometimes not all-through but just have middle and high school. High scores are not as required as elite universities. On the other hand, elite universities consist of many public and some private universities. Prestigious universities try to prioritize liberal arts. That's why those universities are losing popularity. Students are interested in gaining skills or certification.

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Before answering your questions, let me explain the differences between prestigious and elite universities. Prestigious universities are usually all-through private schools from elementary or middle  to high school, or sometimes not all-through but just have middle and high school. High scores are not as required as at elite universities. On the other hand, elite universities consist of many public and some private universities. Prestigious universities try to prioritize liberal arts. That's why those universities are losing popularity. Students are interested in gaining skills or certification.

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The emphasis on skills and certification seems to drive students towards institutions that offer more practical training. How do you think this trend might affect the overall academic rigor and intellectual breadth of students graduating from prestigious universities?

Most prestigious universities prioritize liberal arts so their curricula will widen their intellectual breadth as elite universities. The problem is universities that are neither prestigious nor elite. Without learning liberal arts, we are not cultured. I define "being culture" as "knowing all depends." The correct answer is sometimes more than one and changes depending on the situation and time. Expanding job skills while neglecting culture is similar to science lacking ethics. Without culture, it's difficult for them to live colorfully.

自然な表現

Most prestigious universities prioritize liberal arts so their curricula will widen their intellectual breadth, unlike elite universities. The problem is universities that are neither prestigious nor elite. Without learning liberal arts, we are not cultured. I define "being cultured" as "being educated in all fields." The correct answer is sometimes more than one and changes depending on the situation and time. Expanding job skills while neglecting culture is similar to science lacking ethics. Without culture, it's difficult for them to live colorfully.

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  • admission based on recommendation(推薦入学 )
  • cram school(学習塾、予備校)
  • college entrance exams(大学受験 )
  • academic career-based society(学歴社会)
  • cram(詰め込み勉強をする)
  • The students are cramming for their college entrance exams. (受験生は試験のために詰め込み勉強をします。)
  • Almost all of the students attend cram schools.(ほとんどの受験生が予備校に通っています。)
  • The system of college entrance exams in Japan differs from the one in America. (日本とアメリカの大学入試制度は異なっています。)
  • In Japan, you are required to get high scores on exams. (日本では、テストで高得点を取ることが一番求められています。)
  • Compared with Japan, American colleges set a higher value on your character. (日本と比べてアメリカの大学ではより個人の人となりが重視されています。)

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