消費税増税に関して自分の考えを述べてみよう

Expressing your opinion about the consumption tax increase.
あなたは友人と消費税増税に関して話をしているところです。
消費税が上がったことについて、あなたの考えを外国人の友人に伝えてみましょう。
What do you think about the higher consumption tax rate?
 
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What do you think about the higher consumption tax rate?

I don't agree with the purpose for which the tax is being used. Other than my opinion, I heard many opinions in public as below.
-The gap between the rich and the poor is manifested to the majority of the poor -and the minority of the rich. Consumption tax is a tax that is hard on low income earners and friendly to the rich; it hurts the wallets of low income earners.
-Rather than sucking up taxes from all the people, we would like the Diet members to review their own incomes.

自然な表現

I don't agree with the purpose for which the tax is being used. Other than my opinion, I heard many opinions in public as below.
-The gap between the rich and the poor is manifested in the majority of the poor -and the minority of the rich. Consumption tax is a tax that is hard on low-income earners and friendly to the rich; it hurts the wallets of low-income earners.
-Rather than sucking up taxes from all the people, we would like the Diet members to review their own incomes.

1. Manifests IN something. Correct preposition.
2. and 3. Compound adjectives should be hyphenated.
Yes, I understand your concerns. It's important to ensure that the tax system is fair and equitable and that it doesn't unfairly burden certain groups of people. Do you think there could be alternative ways of raising revenue that would be more equitable?

As an alternative option, I would like to suggest raising corporate taxes.
Rather than just increasing tax revenue, we should work more seriously on reducing costs. I believe many things can be cut, such as public projects that have not been reviewed and continue for no good reason and wasteful spending by Diet members. Politicians tend to condone their expenses.

自然な表現

As an alternative option, I would like to suggest raising corporate taxes.
Rather than just increasing tax revenue, we should work more seriously on reducing costs. I believe many things can be cut, such as public projects that have not been reviewed and continued for no good reason and wasteful spending by Diet members. Politicians tend to condone their expenses.

1. I believe this was just a typo since the first verb is correctly written.
That's a good point. It's important to consider both the revenue-generating aspect of taxes as well as the impact it has on different groups of people. Have you seen any successful examples of countries that have implemented more equitable tax systems?

I'm afraid I have no idea about other countries' situations relevant to their tax.
It is obvious that all citizens and corporations are unwilling to pay taxes though they know paying taxes is mandatory for them. Their satisfaction with taxes is equivalent to their satisfaction with their governments.

自然な表現

I'm afraid I have no idea about other countries' situations relevant to their taxes.
It is obvious that all citizens and corporations are unwilling to pay taxes though they know paying taxes is mandatory for them. Their satisfaction with taxes is equivalent to their satisfaction with their governments.

1. Use the plural form for general references.

Good job.

関連単語

  • tax rate（税率）
  • government（政府）
  • policy（政策）
  • consumption tax（消費税　）
  • tax increase（増税）

関連フレーズ

  • There is a gap between the poor and the rich.（貧富の差がある。）
  • I agree with~ （私は～に賛成です。）
  • They should take ~ into account.（彼らは～を考慮に入れるべきだ。）
  • Income tax should also be taken into consideration. （所得税も考慮されるべきです。）
  • The increase in tax may cause a decrease in consumption.（増税により、消費が減少する可能性があります。）

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