レッスン詳細

テレビCMを活用すべきか議論してみよう

Discussing whether or not TV commercials should be considered for your business
あなたはテレビCMを使ってマーケティング活動をしていくべきか同僚と議論しています。
テレビCMは比較的高額なマーケティング手法なので使える企業も限られてくるでしょう。自分ももし使うなら、どういったものにしたいか話してみましょう。
What do you think about using TV commercials as part of our marketing plan?
 
このレッスンを始める
Writingレッスンの例
Best Teacherで実際に行われている直近のWritingレッスンです。
作成したスクリプトは講師により添削されます。
What do you think about using TV commercials as part of our marketing plan?

That's a good idea. While the economy is in deep recession under pandemic, generally the fee of the TV commercials become lower. It must be a chance to penetrate it. The TV commercial is one of the most intrigued ones and it is outstanding. Especially elder people prefer watching TV, therefore, they are influenced by TV commercials.

自然な表現

That's a good idea. While the economy is in deep recession under the pandemic, generally the fee of the TV commercials has become lower. It must be a chance to penetrate the market. TV commercials are one of the most effective methods for implementing our marketing strategy. Elderly people especially prefer watching TV, therefore, they are influenced by TV commercials.

1. Use "the" to refer to a specific noun.
2. Use the present perfect tense to refer to an action that began in the past and continues to now.
3. You haven't said what "it" refers to yet.
4. Paraphrased for accuracy and clarity to express your point.
5. Spelling.
6. More natural word order.
Yes indeed, almost every single person in Japan will probably see it. I think it is the most efficient method of advertising.

These days, younger generations prefer watching youtube or Netflix on the mobile. Likewise, they love to post and share the events on the SNS site. Their habitual mode of behaviour is very different from the old ones, however, I believe that watching TV is a familiar pastime even the time has been passed.

自然な表現

These days, younger generations prefer watching YouTube or Netflix on mobile phones. Likewise, they love to post and share    events on the SNS sites. Their habitual mode of behaviour is very different from in the past, however, I believe that watching TV is a familiar pastime even though times have changed.

1 4 5. Paraphrased for accuracy and clarity to express your point.
2. You are not referring to specific events.
3. Use the plural form when generalizing.
Yes, we can post advertisements there as well. I think children these days prefer social media as well.

Therefore, we should choose the advertisement ways depending on the targets and products. We have to count the places. For example, in urban areas, the advertisement in trains are very efficient. Passengers are seeing the mobile or looking around the advertisement in trains.

自然な表現

Therefore, we should choose the advertisement strategies depending on the targets and products. We have to consider the places. For example, in urban areas, advertisements in trains are very efficient. Passengers look at their mobile phones and look around at  advertisements in trains.

1. An alternative expression.
2. I believe this is what you want to express.
3 6. Use the plural form when generalizing.
4. Paraphrased for accuracy and clarity to express your point.
5. Look "at" something.

関連単語

  • use（活用する、使う）
  • TV commercial（テレビコマーシャル）
  • marketing（マーケティング）
  • expensive（高額な）
  • attract（引き付ける）

関連フレーズ

  • If you start to run TV commercials, you can attract many people. （TVコマーシャルを始めれば、とても多くの人を引き付けることができる。）
  • It costs too much to implement TV commercials. （TVコマーシャルの導入には多額の費用がかかる。）
  • We have to compare TV commercials with another ways of advertising.（テレビコマーシャルと他の宣伝方法とを比較する必要があります。）
  • What is another way to advertise our service? （自分たちのサービスを広告するための他の方法は何ですか？）
  • Where can we raise some capital to start running TV commercials? （TVコマーシャルを始めるための資金はどこから調達できるのですか？）

こんな方にオススメ

  • ビジネス
  • 上級
  • ミーティング
  • 議論する
  • 部門:マーケティング